Stick Page Forums Archive

Stick Fight no.3

Started by: Erniiii | Replies: 4 | Views: 379

Erniiii

Posts: 7
Joined: Mar 2013
Rep: 10

View Profile
Aug 8, 2013 11:40 AM #1060402
Hey, its my 3rd animation.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=9MvggwDVE-k

pls. comment what j do bad and good ;)
Telepurte

Posts: 205
Joined: Feb 2012
Rep: 10

View Profile
Aug 8, 2013 10:19 PM #1060744
Not bad, but if you wanted some good criticism that you can learn from, try doing shorter animations that we can actually pick away at.
When it's so long it's hard to define where something is needed.
Just keep practicing, and keep working on animation. I look forward to more.
Amf
2

Posts: 614
Joined: Feb 2012
Rep: 10

View Profile
Aug 8, 2013 10:59 PM #1060761
what the fuck telepurte?

Okay Erniii, Completely ignore his "don't do long animations" thing, so many people here try so hard to make animations as long as that or longer but they never do because they lose interest or are too lazy, take it as an achievement that you actually finished that. You dont have to make long animations each time but making long animations will really help, you get alot of practice out of them.
now for cnc, the whole animation looked like it was in slow motion, try to make the pacing a bit faster, it was also very wobbily but that will go away as you animate longer and longer. It also needed alot more easing. If you don't know what that is just google it.
Telepurte

Posts: 205
Joined: Feb 2012
Rep: 10

View Profile
Aug 9, 2013 11:38 PM #1061711
What I mean is that we (or I at least) can't really do criticism too well when there's so much to look at.
Sorry if I said anything wrong >_>
Lian Avenant
2

Posts: 346
Joined: Sep 2012
Rep: 10

View Profile
Aug 9, 2013 11:41 PM #1061716
LOL!!! My Best part is where the red dude puts an unlit sigarette into his mouth and pretends to smoke...
Website Version: 1.0.4
© 2025 Max Games. All rights reserved.