http://www.filz.us/view/83f58eb8-eee/
EDIT: http://www.filz.us/view/6260018d-695/ (This is an updated version of this: http://www.filz.us/view/2296b8c3-665/ .)
Quote from HitsuThe head of the green FB looks weird
The animation of the second looks bad because there's a part seems cutted,cool animation.
Awesome job,can't wait to color it :3
Quote from Timfordthe thing i like about these is that you've grasped a basic idea on how the body moves; most people that try fullbodies end up animating them on a completely 2D plane, as if they were stick figures
you have some consistency issues and your movements are still slightly off, but that's something that can be easily fixed with some practice. keep it up