You do know 8 is the lowest right?

Okay. Now I think I fixed my dumbass post...

Chill bro chill. No one called it a dumbass post. Besides, we've all made mistakes before so it's not a big deal yea?

I am...number 7...*depressed*

I'm not gonna make it ;~; now that birt is probably gonna get in first ill be knocked down to last.

NO *Grabs Boom and slaps him*
YOU WILL GO ON! KEEP IT TOGETHER MAN!! *Slaps*

Nikx is guarateed. It'll be hard to get the last three spots... Especially since BirtDog had finished his. (which means only two)

Boomerang, at least you wont get last. Every know the one paragraph *cough*Canis Majoris*cough* will get last. I don't even know why he turned in his entry...
And boomerang, check out the poll. And no, it's not just cuz I feel sympathy for my lil' man... *whistle*

I don't think the polls really matter much honestly I think its the ranking in your post that do.

But thanks ty and rawr

Man, I really want to give up now. I'm depressed so easily...

why do you want to give up? You posted a really good and long story! I'd vote you easily in my top 5, but I don't know how I would vote because I would have to vote for myself and I do want to win :> MWAHAHA though I want others to have a chance. But yeah, I'd vote highly of you, Gamer.

Good? Nobody ever said that. ;-;

Nikx's is very good and concise, BirtDog...Haven't read, but got a premonition. Yours...What's your moral lesson, anyway? (If there is)

One thing I have to mention though, please guys...NO MASSIVE WALLS OF TEXT!!!
It's very unpleasant and intimidating to try and read. It's almost as if one's eyes will be running on the track, but if there are no "breaks" it gets very tiring. So please space out your paragraphs next time...thank you =_=;