2D fight practice

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Sep 13, 2013 8:16 PM #1083004
Haven't posted something in a while. CnC if you would please.

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Sep 13, 2013 9:05 PM #1083031
Nice! Though it gets a little choppy/disoriented near the middle where he knees the guy, in the reactions especially.
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Sep 14, 2013 1:50 AM #1083140
the first attack is good, but the knee attack looks weird, it's like the attack is not connected to it.
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Sep 14, 2013 6:51 AM #1083204
Quote from Hoya
Nice! Though it gets a little choppy/disoriented near the middle where he knees the guy, in the reactions especially.


Quote from Nx-
the first attack is good, but the knee attack looks weird, it's like the attack is not connected to it.


I see what you guys mean. It was hard to suddenly have the guy's head down with the first knee. I'll work on that. And yeah Nx- it's kinda hard to have the knee connect and have the guy's head bop up with the attack. Maybe I'll double frame the hits.