Hello people. I just wanted to share the comics I'm making for my clan, it started like a clan thing, but then I decided to include a plot that I made 3 years ago, some stories are true some others aren't.
This is an original story created by me. And it takes place in the RHG world, is pretty much MY take on how does the RHG world works if it was real, I'll be ,making these often, I don't have an exactly release date of every issue.
NEMESIS Comics - #11 ISSUE!
Started by: Camila | Replies: 168 | Views: 35,850
Sep 28, 2013 12:34 AM #1089345
Sep 28, 2013 1:38 AM #1089366
Looks cool. I like this comic. They're pretty ;)
Well, keep on going to make these comic, Cami.
I'm looking forward to see this.
Well, keep on going to make these comic, Cami.
I'm looking forward to see this.
Sep 28, 2013 12:01 PM #1089551
I'll just ask:
Who is Xavier and who created him?
I probably should know this, but I dont :I
maybe it was from way back on FA, but...I just dont know
Who is Xavier and who created him?
I probably should know this, but I dont :I
maybe it was from way back on FA, but...I just dont know
Sep 28, 2013 1:33 PM #1089600
Wow, this is really awesome! Can't wait to see more comics!!
Sep 28, 2013 2:27 PM #1089610
Hmm...Do you watch Heroes by any chance, cause Xavier is almost like Sylar. Nonetheless I like the comics, keep em' up.
Sep 28, 2013 8:13 PM #1089722
Quote from JanRavnikI'll just ask:
Who is Xavier and who created him?
I probably should know this, but I dont :I
maybe it was from way back on FA, but...I just dont know
Quote from CamilaI decided to include a plot that I made 3 years ago
I created him.
@Pox idk I might have been thinking on him while creating this character, but it came out from my head.
Sep 28, 2013 8:21 PM #1089728
Neat-O stuff.
Sep 28, 2013 8:26 PM #1089731
Try exaggerating the expressions a little more, for the most part, they're rather bland.
Sep 28, 2013 10:15 PM #1089767
Fordz expression of happiness..... i love it XD
Sep 28, 2013 11:00 PM #1089786
Im not gonna lie, the 3rd issue was just spoonfeeding exposition. There were better more subtle ways to portray that unless his origins were not significant to the plot but still it felt like you just wanted to drop the bomb and get it over with to focus on the brainless battles that's to come. Understandable for the majority in this forum I suppose but the writer in me is screaming Fuck No.
I would have bided my time and planned it out, because now people are going to expect new issues more frequently. Your 1st issue and 2nd had a significant waiting time but your 2nd and 3rd practically had none.
I would have bided my time and planned it out, because now people are going to expect new issues more frequently. Your 1st issue and 2nd had a significant waiting time but your 2nd and 3rd practically had none.
Oct 2, 2013 1:00 AM #1090746
At least she didn't do the whole anime talking two hours before fighting thing. That would have been terrible.
Oct 2, 2013 1:32 AM #1090755
Just because she hasn't done it yet doesn't mean she didn't. And that's completely different. I'm talking about pacing, not parody.
Oct 2, 2013 1:49 AM #1090762
I can't really get your meaning from that post. Oh, well.
Anyway, making a little drawing diagram thing during Jade's speech might have not been the best idea. Perhaps Camilla could have done something where word goes out on what is said the meeting but, only partially. The information is gradually given through shushed conversation and people asking questions; that would've meant more suspense and unreliable sources of information. I would've preferred it, I don't know what Camila's story-telling preferences are, however.
It feels so weird typing a hispanic name while typing in english.
Anyway, making a little drawing diagram thing during Jade's speech might have not been the best idea. Perhaps Camilla could have done something where word goes out on what is said the meeting but, only partially. The information is gradually given through shushed conversation and people asking questions; that would've meant more suspense and unreliable sources of information. I would've preferred it, I don't know what Camila's story-telling preferences are, however.
It feels so weird typing a hispanic name while typing in english.
Oct 2, 2013 2:11 PM #1090911
Im hooked! Loved to read it. MOREMOREMORE!
Oct 17, 2013 6:05 AM #1094212