Shinnai na Ame

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Oct 1, 2013 2:16 PM #1090602
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親愛な雨 - Shinnai na Ame (Beloved Rain)
Nickname: 'Shiname' (SHI-nah-meh)
Age: 15
Reference Sheet v1
Reference Sheet v2 - WIP
Color - Main Body: 9C4E4E
Color - Hair: 973E3E
Color- Eyes: B55B5B
Color - Skin: FDF1E1

[/hr]Technical Details
Abilities and Weaknesses (Click to Show)
Weapon and Fighting Style (Click to Show)
Character Stats by WWhiteSShadow (Click to Show)

[/hr]Narrative Details
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Story (Click to Show)
[spoiler=Long Version (Warning: It's big)]0: Prologue
Once upon a time, there was a swordsman. He wielded the Sword of the Storm, one of the six legendary weather swords. He was fearsome, he was kind and he retired to settle down in the middle of a rainy forest. He made custom umbrellas for a living and all of his customers were RHGs. Some of them were recurring visitors to the household since their orders took months to create. He was also married to a mild-mannered woman and raised a daughter, Shinnai na Ame or 'Shiname' for short. They lived happily ever after, or so they thought.

1: Devastation
One rainy afternoon, Shiname was in her room when a strange visitor came. He wasn't like any of the previous guests and he's definitely not interested in commissioning a custom umbrella. She was curious about the loud arguing in the living room and peeped through the doorway. Her father felt that he possessed evil intentions and strongly suggested that he should leave the premises immediately. The visitor refused to comply and attacked him (and his wife) without prior warning. To make matters worse, the daughter was dragged out of her room and forced to watch her parents get brutally murdered right before her eyes. Then, she herself was left to die with a deep wound to the torso. Poor girl was only seven years old.

2: Indignation
After the visitor has left, she managed to stay alive through immense fear of death, long enough to pull herself together. As she tearfully mourned the loss of her parents she found her father's mystical sword lying around. When she held it her sadness intensified, leaving her in a state of depression for a whole hour. Grief turned into rage when she realized that she can now hurt people, and she really wants to hurt one particular person right now. At that moment she swore to dedicate her whole life to getting revenge.

The next day she went on a rampage like a child desperately searching for a lost object. Her anger is so strong that a vicious typhoon followed her wherever she goes, wreaking havoc in her wake. Without any guidance, she blindly wandered into a nearby kingdom ruled by King Loxias. The young king knew that she was nothing more than a child with a tantrum and hesitated on killing her outright. He lured her outside with a decoy and decided to put her on trial when she grows older and becomes more amiable.

3: Peregrination
When she calmed down from her rampage, the storm following her was now perpetual rain due to her shattered emotions. She is going to kill the unknown murderer and nothing was going to stop her and so she left Stickpage behind to embark on a mad quest for vengeance. Her journey had a rough start, already in the first town outside the border of Stickpage she found herself in trouble and she had absolutely no fighting experience. Within minutes she promptly found herself beaten up to a pulp, inside an abandoned shack. The experience shattered her broken psyche further but her resolve remained absolute. Picking herself up, she marched onwards through every other unfortunate incident thrown at her. Through this grim tenacity she found out that the man she was after was called 'Mr. Big Boss'. He was known for wreaking misery on every unfortunate soul in his path and ruining innocent lives, especially children. The hunt was on and she will find him no matter how long it would take her.

4: Transformation
As the years pass by, she was becoming different from the lonely orphan who couldn't even defend herself from a group of bandits. She survived countless close calls and learned through trial and error. From experience she grew up to become fierce and learned to take advantage of every opportunity she can. She developed her own fighting style, it was fast and savage like a ferocious badger. Her body, once meek and fragile now turned resilient and steadfast from enduring numerous wounds. However the most notable difference from her old self was in her appearance. Every time she looked in the mirror, she noticed that she was gradually looking different than she last recalled. No, this was not puberty; rather she lived outside of Stickpage for so long that her stick form faded away and became fullbody. Still, this didn't stop her from continuing her journey.

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Oct 1, 2013 2:23 PM #1090605
nifty.
i couldnt tell where some of the contact points were in your demo. but i am interested in this
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Oct 1, 2013 4:04 PM #1090624
I agree that the only good part was the silhouette.
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Oct 2, 2013 11:00 PM #1091008
i wanna battle you
add me to your hitlist NOW
... lol i love how straight forward and serious i was just now :D
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Oct 9, 2013 11:42 PM #1091535
Quote from RaWrz-Cupcakes44
i wanna battle you
add me to your hitlist NOW
... lol i love how straight forward and serious i was just now :D

Alright then, now add me in yours. Especially now that the forum's fixed.
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Oct 26, 2013 10:20 AM #1098271
hey I would like to challenge you against maji knight
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Oct 30, 2013 12:30 AM #1099684
Easy huh?

Well I will be sure to go hard on you. I and I will be sure to show you a little animation too :P
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Oct 30, 2013 2:36 AM #1099720
I finally found your RHG
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Oct 30, 2013 3:12 AM #1099731
add me on the hitlist, i would like to see your skills soon.
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Oct 31, 2013 9:57 AM #1100261
A little girl is no match to Azoan brothers
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Nov 6, 2013 11:40 AM #1103344
hehehe Nice RHG it's really rare to see a fullbody RHG :) like the Demo and the weapon :) . . . . . me on yo Hitlist hehehe nice :D
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Nov 6, 2013 12:35 PM #1103373
Meh I'm only on Strong. Expected more....
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Nov 6, 2013 1:25 PM #1103398
Nice RHG :D i think your style its like Rathaken
anyways.......
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How about me can i in your hitlist !!??? lol
and which level am i??lol XD
btw you can see my latest anim from my profile and latest thread
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Nov 6, 2013 1:54 PM #1103417
I like the fullbody demo,This is one of the legit RHG I ever seen.
(Put me in the hit list as easy lol.)

Anyways goodluck on your battles.
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Nov 6, 2013 5:23 PM #1103488
I appreciate the replies, they motivate me.

Anyways update:
-Added Fan Art
-Weaknesses updated
-Story under revision (It's on its way, promise!)
-Hitlists updated
-Stance image changed (Remember people, she holds the sword with the right hand and the sheathe with the left.)
-New trivia added (Footwear, scars)
-Changed other words.