Shinnai na Ame

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Nov 7, 2013 12:34 AM #1103608
:P check out mine
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Nov 9, 2013 12:30 AM #1104603
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You're a formidable opponent. Add me in your hitlist. :3

http://forums.stickpage.com/showthread.php?63632-Felix
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Nov 9, 2013 2:13 PM #1104914
So much things to keep in mind if you RHG this character, I don't see why you would want to ever animate this or even
like, make it....

Its still pretty cool though.
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Nov 9, 2013 2:26 PM #1104923
He did something nice at the end of his demo with the silhouette though, if he gets the skill to do this RHG then he might become famous as one of the fullbodied RHG.
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Nov 9, 2013 7:18 PM #1105059
Liking the fullbody thing you've got going! Your RHG looks very nice, I'd just work on adding a bit more inbetweens in your animation so the movements are smoother, you're using 30 fps yeah?
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Nov 10, 2013 7:02 PM #1105613
Quote from Alien
So much things to keep in mind if you RHG this character, I don't see why you would want to ever animate this or even
like, make it....

Its still pretty cool though.

One word: Ambition

I've always wanted to do this and I've been planning this RHG for months. Now that I finally got past the 'mope around and dream' stage I'm struggling with what I can just because I want to. Also because I'm inspired by this guy, this guy and this OC Tournament. I'm so glad I discovered RHGs.
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Liking the fullbody thing you've got going! Your RHG looks very nice, I'd just work on adding a bit more inbetweens in your animation so the movements are smoother, you're using 30 fps yeah?

Yes, I blame Rebellion for saying that "30 Fps is a lot easier actually". I had to cut corners because my deadline wasn't large enough. In fact, I cut so many corners it's starting to look rounded.
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He did something nice at the end of his demo with the silhouette though, if he gets the skill to do this RHG then he might become famous as one of the fullbodied RHG.

The silhouettes part was my Eureka moment after much experimentation, too bad I'm late for my deadline so I didn't get around to fixing things.
[/hr]Update:
-Story, after all these whiles.
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Nov 16, 2013 12:23 AM #1107767
Nice RHG :D Can i challenge u?
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Nov 16, 2013 12:37 AM #1107769
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Nice RHG :D Can i challenge u?

Sure but don't expect it any time soon. I'm busy with college and clan-related matters (not to mention my other fight). I'll put you on the cue.
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Nov 16, 2013 12:47 AM #1107772
hey GuardianTempest do u have a Facebook account? if u have add me pls :D
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Nov 25, 2013 6:37 AM #1113181
dude "Arcis the Air Lancer (Suwan_X Solais)" is my old version,
you can change it now :)
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Nov 25, 2013 9:03 AM #1113276
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dude "Arcis the Air Lancer (Suwan_X Solais)" is my old version,
you can change it now :)

Done, good to see you again. I thought something happened to your account or such and you made an alt.

Update: Minor word changes in the abilities, weaknesses and personality.
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Nov 25, 2013 10:12 AM #1113318
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Done, good to see you again. I thought something happened to your account or such and you made an alt.

Update: Minor word changes in the abilities, weaknesses and personality.


Thanks the greeting, i was changing my account name
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Dec 2, 2013 12:40 AM #1117395
Man, that's quite a read there. I suggest you simplify some aspects and shorten the whole book down. Try to merge some powers/weaknesses and get rid of some that you think you can live without. With that done, I'd bet you'd have a mighty fine lass. If someone watches a battle and they don't know your powers, you don't wanna confuse them. The whole RHG is well-structured, too. And man, a tropes list? Nice.

I can see you're a real stickler for detail but do you think possible opponents and watchers will be? But if you wanna keep with this in this much detail, you'd better carry on with it. I can you imagine making good stories with this lass, involving any RHG battles you have with her in there.

But just because I made a cool RHG doesn't mean that I'm the best at judging others'.
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Oct 7, 2014 1:59 AM #1250753
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Man, that's quite a read there. I suggest you simplify some aspects and shorten the whole book down. Try to merge some powers/weaknesses and get rid of some that you think you can live without. With that done, I'd bet you'd have a mighty fine lass. If someone watches a battle and they don't know your powers, you don't wanna confuse them. The whole RHG is well-structured, too. And man, a tropes list? Nice.

I can see you're a real stickler for detail but do you think possible opponents and watchers will be? But if you wanna keep with this in this much detail, you'd better carry on with it. I can you imagine making good stories with this lass, involving any RHG battles you have with her in there.

But just because I made a cool RHG doesn't mean that I'm the best at judging others'.
I'm already working on revisions, and I've streamlined her abilities to tenacity, weather empowerment, storm manipulation and a new addition.

Though honestly I feel judged in that I'm not the only one with complicated RHGs. I mean, there's Rayze and AAlbusUUmbra. Speaking of WWhiteSShadow, that's where I got most of my bells and whistles. In fact, I'll steal a few more.

Update:
- Added a 'Journal' section, this will retell her RHG career in a narrative style, much like AAlbus' storyline.
- Revised profile layout
- New 'Electronium Eye' ability, it replaces her left eye. I'm still working on a new rhg image.
- Battle que added
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Oct 7, 2014 2:07 AM #1250764
Whenever you think of something new that's cool you just tack it on huh?