This anim requires thinking. Not just ruthless violence. Deep.

Disjointed.

Overcharacterized.

Laggy.

Actionless.


Disapponting.

That RHG battle had a story and the way you used the same sentence at the end and the start. wow i actually got goosebumps :P

Correcting spelling. Aren't you cute. You're just out of arguments, so you go to something overused and pointless.

I disliked this RHG match because it was about as confusing as Primer and laggier than hell.

Also, there isn't a whole abundance of genuine action.

And find something less pathetic to obsess over than Wreck-It-Ralph. It came out a while ago, nobody cares anymore.

Its alright Nuke! Here, http://www.youtube.com/user/Terkoiz
I bet you like that more then my stuff! :)

Poppet.

My problem isn't with your work.

I think you're a talented guy. I really do. The matches against N8ster and Ichiimaru were very well done.

My problem was with the animation.

And the fact that Ai had shit to say to me about it.

And a couple of oversensitive dicks decided to make me the bad guy over it.

I honestly hope I didn't offend you poppet, but Ai's being an obnoxious grammar Nazi and Smile rubs his nose in everything.

Having honest criticisms isn't a fucking crime people.

your last battle was better than the new , but i did like the story and the action scenes , well done :D
you made my day XD

Ah I understand, No hard feelings!

Quote from Nuclearinsanity

Disjointed.

Overcharacterized.

Laggy.

Actionless.


Disapponting.

Still.
This is not helpful at all. Really bad critique.
Overcharacterized. . . Youre just saying that! I need to know WHAT is overcharacterized. I count this as a bad point. It does not help me in any way.
Laggy, Can be! It has many filters. Do you have many lag problems with swf.'s? Try to watch it on youtube! I cant fix lag that easy.
Actionless. No man. There is action in there.

Disappointing.. What did you espect then? Tell me!

We are trying to tell you to give good critism. Not bad ones!

That's enough.

Ai, not everyone likes their spelling corrected. Nuclear's didnt even do it on purpose. For whatever reason you think correcting people's spelling is proper, it isn't. If anything, it's insulting. Frankly, you do it all the fucking time and it's annoying. Really the only time you should be mocking someone's spelling is if they can't spell properly and even at that correcting them is the last thing you'd do to mock them.

Smile, Nuclear already explained himself so there's no need to rile him up further. Frankly, I dont know why you're defending Ai seeing as he started this back and forth in the first place. Either you're suddenly a white knight or you just like riling people up. Plus, Nuclear really is giving his own opinions and criticisms and he didn't even insult Poppete. If anything, he's just being unhelpful in critique but not unhelpfully spiteful that you would question his character. Knock it off.

NuclearInsanity, for god's sake don't just leave 1-worded criticisms like that. I'm sure Poppete would like to know why you claimed such things. Also, despite Ai's misgivings, getting back at him like a dick is not only immature but unwarranted. Smile was right on that account, but to put your cnc's in further question was out of line. Just redo your cnc and be nice for fuck's sake.

I don't wanna see anymore shit from the three of you, and by that I'm also pertaining to you Ai and your penchant for correcting people's spelling. Now kiss and make up.

We can make up.

But no kissing.

I heard them bitches got herpes.




The narrative on the animation was more confusing than Primer and the action was sparse.

It also lagged to hell.

It was disappointing because I had expected more tight combat from the trailer.

I did like the shark, though. That was a nice touch.

That is what was trying to be said.

Of it was laggy that's on you bro, it runs smoothly for me on repeat.

It's one of those deeper ways of thinking, bro

Quote from RisingNoa21

nice animation, i like it..but i, didn't understand it

the whole battle happened in archanine's mind .

I loved this whole thing. With your implementation of story lines I know you're gonna be awesome one day.
The only thing I can see to work on is the timing of scenes and movements. Some scenes move too fast when it seemed like a slower kind of scene.
And also the faster scenes (as in the fighting and magic scenes and stuff) they were a bit too slow. But overall the story, plot, idea, angles and everything was awesome.

Good Job! ;)