Not bad at all it's good. The only wierd thing was when he paced back to do that run up against the wall. Why did he take such big steps. It's like a soldier marching backwards with his legs out straight.
Thanks guys for the comments! My original plan with that walking was just to make a slow and precise moving like the black guy charges himself to that run, so...I don't know, at first it seemed a good idea but I agree that movement is quite strange :)