You know, this actually isn't bad.

BUT I ABSOLUTELY HATE HER FUCKING FACE. What the hell is wrong with it? Her eyes need to be further set back, and her nose should jut out further, making it look like her lips are set correctly. Her chin/lips should be close to parallel, and work on the eyes. They look.... dumb, in a way. Like she's mentally retarded (I apologize if this offends anyone in any way, shape, or form).

I'm not going to critique the landscape because that isn't where the focus is, but those clouds look really lazily drawn...

SO YEP~

Well yeah, this was done a while back though. But I have progressed since then. I know here face looks... well off XD and the background was somewhat lazily drawn. But thanks for being honest. It's refreshing to hear critiques instead of a bunch of people going "ERMAGHERD LOOK AD DIS SHIIT IT'S BEAUTIFUL." Like I know it has some problems and that's why I posted it, so i can get feedback and get better :D


I mean now that you mention it, I look back at it and it looks like she is like staring at his mask all spaced offy and what not like she's just standing there like "whooooaa... it's so pwetty :3"

i like the concept and yes i agree with basically everything said thus far but id also like to point out that on the very back of spidermans neck... where the girls hand is. it appears as though she is stabbing the remaining 4 fingers into his shoulders/neck along with that the finger seems over extended onto the neck to probably try to cover this up im assuming. nontheless i think this couldve been solved by simply drawing the hand a bit higher. just a little but i get the picture nontheless and i kinda like the highlight on her face along with the texture given to spidey's suit and mask.
for those that dont see it zoom in a bit on spidey's head

i like it but yeah, Gwen bothers me
she seems lazily drawn. her eyes are too close forward, her ears to high, her lips just seem so odd like a weird minature pac-man, and part of her hand is off due to lack of detail. her neck is too long and the back of her head should come down a bit but not too much. Gwen and the background lack too much detail making the drawing less appealing, which goes into my main issue. Spiderman is great condition with good amount of detail but the background and Gwen lack so much

Is it wrong that I opened this thread hoping that it wasn't a spiderman picture?

Nope, I thought the same thing.