Since i'v been doing some art studies lately i desided to make a thread for my art so here are some:
Cyborg: http://findood.deviantart.com/art/Cyborg-433173952
Zombie girl: http://findood.deviantart.com/art/Zombie-girl-411718972?q=sort%3Atime%20gallery%3AFindood&qo=4
Skull: http://findood.deviantart.com/art/Skull-study-411719825?q=sort%3Atime%20gallery%3AFindood&qo=3
Chrome ball: http://findood.deviantart.com/art/high-chrome-ball-study-411720794?q=sort%3Atime%20gallery%3AFindood&qo=2
Drinking glass: http://findood.deviantart.com/art/drinking-glass-study-411721088?q=sort%3Atime%20gallery%3AFindood&qo=1
Water droplets: http://findood.deviantart.com/art/water-droplet-study-411721269?q=sort%3Atime%20gallery%3AFindood&qo=0
Sorry for the bad phone quality and cnc please :)
Findood's art study thread
Started by: Findood | Replies: 8 | Views: 1,423
Nov 5, 2013 2:58 PM #1102906
Nov 9, 2013 12:09 PM #1104858
Seriously? no comment on this thread? awhhh that's a shame, i guess Stickpage art forum is dead now then, isn't it?
Well, for the sake of your effort here, i would said you did pretty good job on the Chrome ball and Drinking glass cup.
Both of them looks very fascinating, very fine and accurate lighting and details so far. Though i must say that
the rest aren't that good, especially the Zombie girl and a little bit of the skull, but for this time i'll go with the zombie girl.
Why? i'm not sure what you're aiming for but lets just said if you're an artist then realism would mostly be your task,
and if that's the case then i'd like to say that the whole head just doesn't seem to convey reality as much. Dont get me wrong though,
i know it does look somewhat and somehow, or it's in a degree where you can precisely understand the illustration of the
work already, but what i mean is, it's not good enough, sorry if this offended you but like i said, dont get me wrong, i'm just trying to help you out :)...
so here's why i said what i said, LOL XD...
Flaws that i must point for you, for the sake of your mistakes and improvement :)
1. look at the hair, the way it was illustrated on her head just look like its flat, even with those folds at the end, - (below) - Tips, maybe it has something to do with the lights and shadows.
2. Im not sure what those lines on her face are but i assume it's the skins that was pealed off of her face, they just dont seem to look like it was actually connected with her inner flesh - (face)
it just look more like she's wearing a broken mask instead of her skin being torn or pealed off - Tips, try make the line a little bit softer and not so solid, also, use some reference if you must.
3. where is the light coming from? is it from the front of her face? seems like there's lights coming from everywhere, and if that's what it is, then it's just quite odd. Tips, i think it's probably coming
straight from her face but if that what it is then the lights should shine directly in the center of her face and forehead as well, so try that :).
i mean i know there could be lights coming from everywhere if you intended it so but the way you portrate it here just doesn't say that. Art is like a language too friend.
the way you put everything in it can mean or describe something, but what's more significant is how you want it to be, i mean the way you draw it whether correct or odd can
totally change what you're trying to go for in a completely different way ya know, so if you dont do it correctly, it'll "say" something completely different then what you're trying to give,
and that's important, as an artist, so keep that in mind :) These are some very nice art works and i know you must have worked hard on them, so i do give you the respect for that :),
if help and criticism is what you're looking for, then i hope this can at least give you an idea of what mistakes you need to correct or improve, so yeah hope you find something friend :),
and hmm lastly, keep digging, there's still more golds in the cave, i know its dark, but it will be worth it once you become rich :)
Well, for the sake of your effort here, i would said you did pretty good job on the Chrome ball and Drinking glass cup.
Both of them looks very fascinating, very fine and accurate lighting and details so far. Though i must say that
the rest aren't that good, especially the Zombie girl and a little bit of the skull, but for this time i'll go with the zombie girl.
Why? i'm not sure what you're aiming for but lets just said if you're an artist then realism would mostly be your task,
and if that's the case then i'd like to say that the whole head just doesn't seem to convey reality as much. Dont get me wrong though,
i know it does look somewhat and somehow, or it's in a degree where you can precisely understand the illustration of the
work already, but what i mean is, it's not good enough, sorry if this offended you but like i said, dont get me wrong, i'm just trying to help you out :)...
so here's why i said what i said, LOL XD...
Flaws that i must point for you, for the sake of your mistakes and improvement :)
1. look at the hair, the way it was illustrated on her head just look like its flat, even with those folds at the end, - (below) - Tips, maybe it has something to do with the lights and shadows.
2. Im not sure what those lines on her face are but i assume it's the skins that was pealed off of her face, they just dont seem to look like it was actually connected with her inner flesh - (face)
it just look more like she's wearing a broken mask instead of her skin being torn or pealed off - Tips, try make the line a little bit softer and not so solid, also, use some reference if you must.
3. where is the light coming from? is it from the front of her face? seems like there's lights coming from everywhere, and if that's what it is, then it's just quite odd. Tips, i think it's probably coming
straight from her face but if that what it is then the lights should shine directly in the center of her face and forehead as well, so try that :).
i mean i know there could be lights coming from everywhere if you intended it so but the way you portrate it here just doesn't say that. Art is like a language too friend.
the way you put everything in it can mean or describe something, but what's more significant is how you want it to be, i mean the way you draw it whether correct or odd can
totally change what you're trying to go for in a completely different way ya know, so if you dont do it correctly, it'll "say" something completely different then what you're trying to give,
and that's important, as an artist, so keep that in mind :) These are some very nice art works and i know you must have worked hard on them, so i do give you the respect for that :),
if help and criticism is what you're looking for, then i hope this can at least give you an idea of what mistakes you need to correct or improve, so yeah hope you find something friend :),
and hmm lastly, keep digging, there's still more golds in the cave, i know its dark, but it will be worth it once you become rich :)
Nov 9, 2013 2:38 PM #1104933
Quote from Vincent - XSeriously? no comment on this thread? awhhh that's a shame, i guess Stickpage art forum is dead now then, isn't it?
Well, for the sake of your effort here, i would said you did pretty good job on the Chrome ball and Drinking glass cup.
Both of them looks very fascinating, very fine and accurate lighting and details so far. Though i must say that
the rest aren't that good, especially the Zombie girl and a little bit of the skull, but for this time i'll go with the zombie girl.
Why? i'm not sure what you're aiming for but lets just said if you're an artist then realism would mostly be your task,
and if that's the case then i'd like to say that the whole head just doesn't seem to convey reality as much. Dont get me wrong though,
i know it does look somewhat and somehow, or it's in a degree where you can precisely understand the illustration of the
work already, but what i mean is, it's not good enough, sorry if this offended you but like i said, dont get me wrong, i'm just trying to help you out :)...
so here's why i said what i said, LOL XD...
Flaws that i must point for you, for the sake of your mistakes and improvement :)
1. look at the hair, the way it was illustrated on her head just look like its flat, even with those folds at the end, - (below) - Tips, maybe it has something to do with the lights and shadows.
2. Im not sure what those lines on her face are but i assume it's the skins that was pealed off of her face, they just dont seem to look like it was actually connected with her inner flesh - (face)
it just look more like she's wearing a broken mask instead of her skin being torn or pealed off - Tips, try make the line a little bit softer and not so solid, also, use some reference if you must.
3. where is the light coming from? is it from the front of her face? seems like there's lights coming from everywhere, and if that's what it is, then it's just quite odd. Tips, i think it's probably coming
straight from her face but if that what it is then the lights should shine directly in the center of her face and forehead as well, so try that :).
i mean i know there could be lights coming from everywhere if you intended it so but the way you portrate it here just doesn't say that. Art is like a language too friend.
the way you put everything in it can mean or describe something, but what's more significant is how you want it to be, i mean the way you draw it whether correct or odd can
totally change what you're trying to go for in a completely different way ya know, so if you dont do it correctly, it'll "say" something completely different then what you're trying to give,
and that's important, as an artist, so keep that in mind :) These are some very nice art works and i know you must have worked hard on them, so i do give you the respect for that :),
if help and criticism is what you're looking for, then i hope this can at least give you an idea of what mistakes you need to correct or improve, so yeah hope you find something friend :),
and hmm lastly, keep digging, there's still more golds in the cave, i know its dark, but it will be worth it once you become rich :)
Thanks Vincent- X! Like you said SP is little bit dead, atliest the art section, so you really made my day with your reply (I had like 4 threads with no replys). And i agree with every word you said. I started these pieces because i haven't done any art by traditional methods (today i do almost only digital art) so i worried i would become rusty. The zombie girl was my first piece so it was little bit off. What you said was complitely correct also i noticed that the eyes are huge although if she would be young. You gave me really good feedback and i will take it to inconsideration when i make my next piece. :)
Nov 9, 2013 2:48 PM #1104940
I did look at your work but didn't comment as I can't CnC this art efficiently.
Partially because I can't really describe what need improving and also because there excellent, especially the glass and droplets with the strong contrast.
Partially because I can't really describe what need improving and also because there excellent, especially the glass and droplets with the strong contrast.
Nov 9, 2013 4:01 PM #1104985
Quote from KursuraI did look at your work but didn't comment as I can't CnC this art efficiently.
Partially because I can't really describe what need improving and also because there excellent, especially the glass and droplets with the strong contrast.
Well i'm flattered now. Thanks Kursura :) If you can't say anything from the work thats fine but all i ment was that don't let the art section die. Make new art threads and comment ;D
Nov 25, 2013 6:44 AM #1113185
Quote from FindoodThanks Vincent- X! Like you said SP is little bit dead, atliest the art section, so you really made my day with your reply (I had like 4 threads with no replys). And i agree with every word you said. I started these pieces because i haven't done any art by traditional methods (today i do almost only digital art) so i worried i would become rusty. The zombie girl was my first piece so it was little bit off. What you said was complitely correct also i noticed that the eyes are huge although if she would be young. You gave me really good feedback and i will take it to inconsideration when i make my next piece. :)
No problem friend, im just glad it helped. if you are serious about getting better then yes i would recommend you to master it on traditional method dealing with papers and pencils as well, or at least you get it to some degree with it.
people may not realize it but starting from tradition can really help alot for getting better and perhaps, improve faster. so yeah going back to tradition and improve it is not a bad idea at all, just keep it up and im sure you will find your way out soon :)
Nov 27, 2013 10:47 AM #1114536
Quote from Vincent - XNo problem friend, im just glad it helped. if you are serious about getting better then yes i would recommend you to master it on traditional method dealing with papers and pencils as well, or at least you get it to some degree with it.
people may not realize it but starting from tradition can really help alot for getting better and perhaps, improve faster. so yeah going back to tradition and improve it is not a bad idea at all, just keep it up and im sure you will find your way out soon :)
You are right. I used to do a lot traditional art (and even decided i was going to become a painter when i grew up -_-), but then i started animating and after that i started digital art. Anyways i'm going to release new art soon.
Nov 28, 2013 11:00 AM #1115102
Well, I really loved your work. That Drinking Glass And Water drops Looks Very realistic !
So, Keep up ! :)
So, Keep up ! :)
Feb 10, 2014 5:34 PM #1156161
Update: Added the Cyborg