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Nov 25, 2013 10:16 PM #1113669
Name: Umoso Yamata
Age: 15
Deity: Fire
Backstory: Umoso was born into a small village, the only one with the ability to harness flames. This was odd since the village mostly harnessed Light and Life magic. Since he had no one to mentor him, he practice his Fire magic by himself. All he ranted about was becoming the strongest in the village, so one day the City will recognize him. Though he had high hopes for himself, no one supported him. Not even his own blood. Somewhat shunned by the entire village, the Elder was the first to act. The Elder was the first to reach out to Umoso, giving him the village's sacred dagger. It was one of several relics from many great magicians. This dagger happened to be Remi, the first's, a powerful Fire mage's, Primary weapon. This encouraged Umoso to train harder, but one day he lead to his village's destruction. Practicing a powerful skill he lost control, setting ablaze the majority of the village. Without anything the Elders along with the village people attempted to extinguish the flames. Umoso, frozen in fear watched as the village slowly burned. He was summoned to the village's meeting hall where he was exiled by the three Great Elders of the village. As he left the village all he saw was faces of disgust and fear. He turned around with his a wide grin on his face, shouting, '' One day you'll see. I'll be someone. Someone to remember.'' Leaving the village with no regrets.
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Nov 25, 2013 10:39 PM #1113682
Chrome just rolled his eyes. Good grief.

For the past 2 hours, all things are moving really fast. He only met several person to be in this whole mess. But nevertheless, it's already too late to comeback. Looking around them, he saw a pretty woman looking at them, especially Albert. Releasing a sigh, he only whistled as time grows by, waiting for what happens next.

Yet he was pretty fucking bored. Nothing happened except vines tangling all his body. It was slightly painful, and some of his clothes are torn, but he just released a chuckle. Beside, all his clothes are only the cheap ones. He could buy new shirt any time he want. But as he thought that, he also think of something. How to escape all this blasphemy and beat all the guards around them.

"This level of security makes me sick." Glaring at the guards, he added, "your momma are much better than this."
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Nov 25, 2013 10:46 PM #1113687
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(Camilla, Fenrir is camouflaged, silly)

Those eyes. The eyes he hated. The eyes he feared. The judging eyes of bystanders, fortunate enough to be able to purchase their own food. With their silk garbs and golden jewelry. Did they even stop for one moment to think of the peasants who made them? Who were being used as mere tools for their benefit. No, they did not. To them the poor and unfortunate were nothing but rats and he was one of them, Albert Stinkborn the Rat.

Blood dripped from his wrists down unto the street. The vines that bound his hands and neck had burrowed their thorns deep into his flesh. With all the might he had, he moved his head to the right to see a noble woman walking their way. Her eyes were pure and caring. Her words surprising, but soothing. "Are they monsters or humans?" she yelled at one of the officers that had them bound. The question was so absurd that everyone around her shook their heads a moment. Did this lady not realize who she was talking about? A band of hopeless thieves, which was brought together with nothing but bad intentions. The officer mumbled a little, and she angrily repeated her question. There was nothing for him to do but to give in. "Humans, my Lady", he said. Human. It was something Albert hadn't been called in a long time and he was sure his companions weren't either. The noble woman turned her attention towards them and shouted.

"Have you ever murdered someone? Or stolen something else but food?", she yelled. What a strange question. Of course they had. At least Albert had. Last moon, he stole a golden axe from a mansion down in Rivergrave, so he could sell it. How else would he afford any of his equipment? But for some reason he was compelled to lie. For some reason, he did not want to be the one to taint her innocence with knowledge of the ugly truth. He wanted to open his mouth and tell her how unfair this was. How the rich should share with the poor, how nobility and peasants should be treated equal.

But then he remembered why they were there and where they were heading. And even though her eyes had something special, a burning fire of hope, he had to let her know the truth.
"Of course we have", Albert let out, gaining the woman's attention. "You're not a part of the group unless you've spilled some blood! Ha ha ha ha OH-", he laughed, before being cut off by the tightening of the vines, burrowing their thorns deeper into his flesh. The woman was baffled, her look changing from anger to confusion. "Shut up, Rat!" One of the officers yelled. He unsheathed a sword and continued "The next one of you to talk, gets the blade! Take them away!".

And while the officers carried on their arrest, the woman kept looking at them, and Albert looked at her, knowing that he would possibly never see such beautiful eyes again.


I like where this is going.

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Nov 25, 2013 10:58 PM #1113692
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As he listened to the muffled footsteps of the officers carrying away his friends Fenrir could not help but wonder who the soft voice had belonged to. He carefully got out of his grassy shelter, taking care to not collapse it as he made his way out. Staying under a thick wall of mud for this time had made his eyes fairly familiar with the dark of dusk, he wonders around for a little while trying to figure out the path his friends had been taken when he notices a person lurking in the shadows. Fenrir walks up to him and asks him for directions, and out of instinct if he knows who the woman with the soft voice was. The stranger simply points towards the cities center and disappears into the shadows.

Fenrir thought he would best hurry up and so decides to trust the stranger and make his way deeper into the city.

Deep in the cities center there is an abundance of people, smells and sightings but determined to save his friends he pays no attention to all that. All he sees are the four foreign priests standing around a woman, he did not know her, but he knew that no local person would have ever reacted the way the woman with the soft voice had witnessing the arrest of a few outlaws. He pushed through the crowd towards the woman with the soft voice, as he got closer to her the flow of people seemed to increase until Fenrir nearly lost sight of his target. He pushed harder through the crowd until finally he somehow ended in between the group of four foreign priests.
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Nov 25, 2013 11:22 PM #1113697
Hope it's not late.

Name: The Weeper(Leigh)
Age:19
Deity:Dark
Backstory:A silent girl that wandered around the lands with no objective than protect everyone without asking anything back. Carrying her two swords, she only served justice. then she met a few of friends: Alice, Joe, Luke and Heather adventurers all of the and started to live in a village . One day, she and friends went to explore a acient temple. They passed trapped rooms, dangerous dungeons and terrible monsters. When they found that what looked the end of this temple, but they arrived in a huge room with passages everywhere, a truly maze. After a long time, they found the last room. This one had a pillar with a dark orb on it. Leigh climbed the pillar and grabbed the the dark orb that dissappeared on her hands. Backing to home, the adventurers didn't care about not having a prize, the adventure was awesome.
One day some knights appeared on Leigh's village asking for the power she carries, but she didn't know anything. The Knights destroyed the village. Leigh tried to stop them, but they were really strong. They kill'd everyone. Seeing that, Leigh unleashed a great dark power and killed most of the knights, she was a beast. The Leader Knight stopped her and made her faint. When Leigh woke up, she was chained in a castle room. Her swords were in a table. The Knights were talking about how take the power from her. Then she remembered what have happened. Leigh unleashed the beast again, broke the chains, picked up the swords and kill'd all the knights with no mercy. When Leigh took mind back, she only saw dead knights and blood on floor. She looked back and saw a trembling scared female child. Leigh looked at the another side, unsheathed and ran away before someone comes.

Known as The Weeper because black marks under her eyes. Leigh became a silent girl that wandered around the lands with no objective than protect everyone without asking anything back.
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Nov 25, 2013 11:31 PM #1113702
(It appears that Gunnii is behind a bit.)

Rat had just sealed the fates of the band of thieves. They would be hung by their necks in front of the whole city, in the Citadel at that! Silas couldn't just let that happen without a fight. He WOULDN'T let it happen without a fight. He was the strongest among his rag-tag team of misfits, and he would make sure that they, along with the whole of Felicita knew this.

It only took only a few seconds and a bit of effort for Silas to produce the blade he kept hidden in the leather gauntlet he wore on his left wrist. Expertly turning around, he stuck it between his hands and began sawing at the vines that were bound to his wrists. The vines gave way easily since they were already withering away.

He looked up from his work to see Girlie staring deep into his face. She had been watching him the entire time, quietly waiting until he had finished. Deciding that cut her free himself would be too much of a risk, Silas quickly flipped the knife out of his now false binds and held it out for her to take it. The ride to the Citadel would be short and he would need all the help he could get if he wanted to escape the Gallows.

(Did I do it right?)
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Nov 25, 2013 11:52 PM #1113709
Noticing that Fenrir has been following her, she speaks to the priests: "I just saw a beautiful bracelet in the shop over there, I'll go check it out really quick, wait here please, it'll be just a minute". Sasha thinks:"If he is a friend of the thieves, he should be looking for some help...". She does go to the shop she mentioned to the priests and then, sasha jumps out through a window to make sure she was alone, hoping to be able to lend some kind of help to Fenrir's friends.
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Nov 25, 2013 11:59 PM #1113715
Man I'm having a hard time jumping in this story. Too focused on Fenrir and Sasha e_e
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Nov 26, 2013 12:09 AM #1113719
Well, watching a woman all alone and dressed in the robes of a noble leap through a window is certainly a sight. Its also a key opportunity for any preying thieves stalking her in the shadows...I'm just sayin'
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Nov 26, 2013 12:16 AM #1113723
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Well, watching a woman all alone and dressed in the robes of a noble leap through a window is certainly a sight. Its also a key opportunity for any preying thieves stalking her in the shadows...I'm just sayin'


She'd wipe their asses out you know?. But let's not go off topic.
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Nov 26, 2013 12:33 AM #1113731
Yeah I was just giving him a place to start.
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Nov 26, 2013 2:06 AM #1113793
If you're looking for a place to start, it's no exaggeration when I said the whole of Felicita would be there to see the executions.
Any thieves, appalled to see the deaths of their fellow kin, may find that opportunity to band together and break them free.
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Nov 26, 2013 2:51 AM #1113814
Name: Necklare Ellut
Age: 15
Deity: Earth
Backstory: Necklare was raised in a village, Eltion was the name. He was an outcast becasue of his abilites and there were only two others like him both females that had mysteriously went missing. When he turned 11 , The age you are presumed an adult, He decided to leave the village in pursuit to find answers to his abilities and if they're were others like him. He spent later years traveling across unknown lands improving his skill.
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Nov 26, 2013 2:58 AM #1113815
Oh I thought of one.

Meanwhile...

"Where the heck did Jon go?" said Joh questioning himself. Joh Len got separated from Jon Zinx, because of the ruckus at those two buildings; he was wondering around without knowing where he was going or even where he was at. Then suddenly, something caught his attention, a beautiful woman in a noble dress jumping out through the window from a store. As a boy that lived in the mountain ever since he was a baby and never been to a city, he came interested in what she was doing for he loves a brand new experience. "Hmm... Wonder what she's doing..." said Joh, "Well let's find out!" As the woman jumped out, Joh secretly sneaked behind her and yelled, "What'cha doin'?!"
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Nov 26, 2013 3:10 AM #1113817
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Name: Necklare Ellut
Age: 15
Deity: Earth
Backstory: Necklare was raised in a village, Eltion was the name. He was an outcast becasue of his abilites and there were only two others like him both females that had mysteriously went missing. When he turned 11 , The age you are presumed an adult, He decided to leave the village in pursuit to find answers to his abilities and if they're were others like him. He spent later years traveling across unknown lands improving his skill.

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