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Wow Devour that actually sounds like an amazing champ, and it sounds really balenced. Go share that with rito

Dammit Miracle

Their W ability is fucking adorable

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Dammit Miracle

Nice concept, only that I think there are some things that will bring it down to Rito's eyes

Even though your story is good, for them it will be not: lately Riot has stated how "plot is overrated" in the sense that they decided to make champions following a certain factor. The factor I'm talking about is about not making champion following a general way (which is, make a character with his up and downs), but to extremize that shit
Give a look at all the last champions: after Yasuo, there are ONLY champions with one-way-set personalities/stories (except Azir (but he actually gets pretty much close to it))
-Vel'Koz is about knowledge's desire
-Braum is about "gentle giant"
-Gnar is about "cuteness"
-Kalista is about revenge
-Rek'Sai is about land sharks (pure animal)
-Bard is about "cosmic energy being"
And lastly comes Ekko, which is about "swagga-boy-hood" cool-version.jpg. Basically, what they search for their characters, in my opinion, is more about unilateral settings so that people can easily symphatize with the one they think rapresents them the most instead of making someone "normal"
An example
Take Talon: his story is about him having always fought for himself and now forsaking the chance to go back to that state to instead honor his respect for a single person. However, if you ever play him, his lines give out nothing of that
Take Tristana: they basically erased her story and completely saturated her lines about her being a sassy army girl, so that whoever has his liking about this kind of thing can find the champion that completely matches with his tastes, without leaving any bad ones in his mouth
Said this, your story is fine, but I think the setting is such that people can't get captivated by it (look Quinn and Valor, nobody worships that shit)
(I hope I explained what I meant properly, since it is a hard concept to explain in the way I feel it. If something looks strange, I'll try to explain it into another way)
(PS I might be wrong too btw. I'm writing this to also see if what I'm thinking is correct (or close too) or is something that is inside me on solipsistic levels)

About their abilities, I find the Q problematic, since it is quite similar to suppression and usually suppression abilities shouldn't be regular ones (they are mostly ultimates)
Unless we're playing Dota 2
Also, the passive and the R don't go well together: the R works at his most when they're both distant, but if they're distant their passive will take their HP. In this way, there is no reason to actually get distant since otherwise you'd be losing HP, but if you're close then the ultimate shouldn't be needed as much, since it's channeled

Also, last thing
Swords are overrated as much there as here with RHGs :T
Something more defensive might be better, considering his role. Unless it is not a normal sword (like Diana's one)

I love your idea Devour! Go for it! Show Rito!

Ayy... After 1 year of waiting, figuring stuff out and fighting with Rito i've finally got my stuck account back to life! Im so bad at this game right now...
Anyway...Here i am.

Summoner name: ThisOneWeirdGuy
Server: NA
Favorite Champions: Xerath, Victor, Thresh
Favorite Role: Mid or Support
I do have a Skype but can't use it too often...Family gets annoyed

They could make a tango dancer and artificial intelligence skins for this.

Rengar's broken with black cleaver. You can literally have maxed cdr with his core assassin items now. It's seriously like painfully bursty and tank melting all around. I two shot almost anybody with the double q.

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They could make a tango dancer skin for this

Awww the recall animation could be them doing the tango rito pls make this champion

The moment you realize lee is fun.

There's something I want to test at some point, since ashe technically hits multiple times when her fully stacked q is active, Im wondering if black cleaver activates multiple times on one autoattack.

Do we all agree new black cleaver is fucking absurd. Have you guys seen it on garen yet?

I watched veir build that shit on garen and it was amazeballs. Rito plz.

Muramana might be fun with Ashe too if it procs three times per auto attack :u

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Muramana might be fun with Ashe too if it procs three times per auto attack :u

Oh wow, I didn't even think of that. That is so brutal.

We must try these things. will go into a custom with someone to test at some point

It seems I have to re install my client because it's broken.

Nevermind I fixed it by running it as admin

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Muramana might be fun with Ashe too if it procs three times per auto attack :u

Just tried it: it procs only once (not per normal attack, but per Q usage (only once)) and the item is detrimental for building an Ashe properly
Derp