Free Typing
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YujunPosts: 668
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View Profile This is me typing off the top of my mind and if I continue, I might make this into a Story.
This is based on my wRHG
Skai looked around at the pitch black room around him with his glowing eyes. On the floor laying against the walls were brown boxes, some were open, some were still completely closed. He took a step forward almost completely silently and paused.
"I know you're there." said a deep chilling voice from a little farther. Skai stood frozen, his heart beating louder than a drum.
It took a moment for Skai to reply, "How did-"
"Your eyes make it quite obvious." interrupted the deep voice.
"Why cant I see you? Your in front of me, aren't you?" Skai replied.
"Yes, but I am hidden among these boxes." Skai paused for a moment, but then took another step forward. "Dont," said the dark voice as Skai froze once again, but then smirked.
"Why? Are you scared?" Skai said in a sarcastic voice, "Dont worry, I dont ALWAYS bite." The room stood silent. "Come out, come out, where ever you are!" sang Skai. After at least five minutes, a bright light came on at the ceiling. Skai's eyes were so used to the dark that when the light came on, he couldn't see until at least 10 seconds later. Finally, Skai could see what the light was revealing.
He was in a medium sized completely white room, with tile floor and clean and shiny white walls surrounded him. "Where did all the boxes go?" Skai said confused at what was going on around him.
"Turn around." said the voice. Skai immediately turned around and his eyes widened to what he was seeing.
Should I keep going?
deviPosts: 2,756
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View Profile This is me typing off the top of my mind and if I continue, I might make this into a Story.
This is based on my wRHG
Skai looked around at the pitch black room around him with his glowing eyes. On the floor laying against the walls were brown boxes, some were open, some were still completely closed. He took a step forward almost completely silently and paused.
"I know you're there." said a deep chilling voice from a little farther. Skai stood frozen, his heart beating louder than a drum.
It took a moment for Skai to reply, "How did-"
"Your eyes make it quite obvious." interrupted the deep voice.
"Why cant I see you? Your in front of me, aren't you?" Skai replied.
"Yes, but I am hidden among these boxes." Skai paused for a moment, but then took another step forward. "Dont," said the dark voice as Skai froze once again, but then smirked.
"Why? Are you scared?" Skai said in a sarcastic voice, "Dont worry, I dont ALWAYS bite." The room stood silent. "Come out, come out, where ever you are!" sang Skai. After at least five minutes, a bright light came on at the ceiling. Skai's eyes were so used to the dark that when the light came on, he couldn't see until at least 10 seconds later. Finally, Skai could see what the light was revealing.
He was in a medium sized completely white room, with tile floor and clean and shiny white walls surrounded him. "Where did all the boxes go?" Skai said confused at what was going on around him.
"Turn around." said the voice. Skai immediately turned around and his eyes widened to what he was seeing.
Should I keep going?
Its a really good idea, so I think you should try to continue it.
Good luck if you do continue
Also: Check your post amount matey
Lethal2Posts: 1,163
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View Profile "Why cant I see you? Your in front of me, aren't you?" Skai replied.
"Yes, but I am hidden among these boxes." Skai paused for a moment, but then took another step forward. "Dont," said the dark voice as Skai froze once again, but then smirked.
"Why? Are you scared?" Skai said in a sarcastic voice, "Dont worry, I dont ALWAYS bite." The room stood silent. "Come out, come out, where ever you are!" sang Skai. After at least five minutes, a bright light came on at the ceiling. Skai's eyes were so used to the dark that when the light came on, he couldn't see until at least 10 seconds later. Finally, Skai could see what the light was revealing.
Take note on the underlined words. "cant" should be replaced with "can't", "your" should be replaced with "you're" and "dont" should be replaced "don't".
Oh, you should continue it. I want to see the full version of the story c:
YujunPosts: 668
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View Profile "Why cant I see you? Your in front of me, aren't you?" Skai replied.
"Yes, but I am hidden among these boxes." Skai paused for a moment, but then took another step forward. "Dont," said the dark voice as Skai froze once again, but then smirked.
"Why? Are you scared?" Skai said in a sarcastic voice, "Dont worry, I dont ALWAYS bite." The room stood silent. "Come out, come out, where ever you are!" sang Skai. After at least five minutes, a bright light came on at the ceiling. Skai's eyes were so used to the dark that when the light came on, he couldn't see until at least 10 seconds later. Finally, Skai could see what the light was revealing.
Take note on the underlined words. "cant" should be replaced with "can't", "your" should be replaced with "you're" and "dont" should be replaced "don't".
Oh, you should continue it. I want to see the full version of the story c:
Oh I see. Thanks.
Its a really good idea, so I think you should try to continue it.
Good luck if you do continue
Also: Check your post amount matey
Oh wow