Grass vs Dirt

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Feb 24, 2014 2:32 AM #1164003
this is an animation I made last year, It was kinda inspired by Animator vs Animation, at least the animation.

Hope you enjoy...

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=x2yzCUdUbEM

Tell me what you think, do you think I should make a sequel?
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Feb 24, 2014 11:28 AM #1164257
i really liked the concept of grass and dirt.
a few things to improve.
- Framerate: you should have some inbetween-frames here and there.
- the dude throwing the dirt, is kinda slow. you should delete some frames there.

for the rest, nice!
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Feb 24, 2014 3:18 PM #1164362
Like sterken said, I liked the concept alot and I could see your inspiration from animator vs animation quite clearly in the animation. I also thought the ending was quite clever. The actual animation was quite smooth but at times it was a bit slow and if the animation was longer it could become boring but it didn't this time around. I think a sequel would be interesting and you left it on a cliffhanger so you might as well make it.
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Feb 24, 2014 4:18 PM #1164384
Quote from sterken
i really liked the concept of grass and dirt.
a few things to improve.
- Framerate: you should have some inbetween-frames here and there.
- the dude throwing the dirt, is kinda slow. you should delete some frames there.

for the rest, nice!


Thanks for the advice! I thought the same with the dirt throwing. ;)
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Mar 1, 2014 4:14 PM #1167444
This is cool! It was a bit slow at some times but overall. Decent and nice!