Hi, i'm new as you can see. And I made four animations, 3 were tests, one being my very first animation ever and the other two are the ones I made after that. The 4th one I made for the Grayscale collab, not going to post that, have no idea if Kitsune(?) would like spoilers.

Anyway,
My 1st even animation.
http://antiup.net/view/8401

2nd ever animation.
http://antiup.net/view/8402

3rd ever animation.
http://antiup.net/view/8403

Please C&C on them, i'll take any crit be it bad or good.
P.S (20 posts to insert URL's? Why?)

There you go editted

My 1st even animation.
www.antiup.net/view/8401

2nd ever animation.
www.antiup.net/view/8402

3rd ever animation.
www.antiup.net/view/8403

on your first animation i say its a good run for a first.work on the turn around, because it's kinda unrealistic,

2nd, a bit wobbly, could still use some work on the physics, i suggest you increas you fps a bit to improve the physics a bit more.

3rd, work on the background, don't just colour in the back. Scince the stick was dropping down it needed to be done earlier, meaning the jump was to long, i suggest you reduce the tween you done.

But overall good attempt.

for tuts go to www.stonesbucket.com

At 20 posts I think you can post links.

The first and second seem to be the average first and seconds. Standard movement practice you should continue doing because you're making nice progress as it seems.

The third one's ground explosion is done surprisingly well. The slow motion, rather than you just moving it a random amount every frame, should, just as much as fast motions, contain effort and precise smooth motion. The background is beneath what you, and anyone can do, as drifts said.

Not bad, Akeru. Not bad.

Thank you, Animating is pretty fun. I don't really like my jump test it looks awkward how he lands... My run test is my favorite and I worked really hard on that explosion so thank you. And the slow motion to me wasn't very good, I need to work on that -.-.

Anymore C&C ?, anything would be nice.

hey there, i thaught i would check u out coz u seem like a nice person ^^ coz i hav seen quite a few of yer posts,
anywayz i think for your first 3 animations there r good:Smile: but im new too and also im not verry good at criticizeing lol

i duno if im aloud to post a link on somone elses thred so could u plz tell me coz i wanted to show u my only ani on stickpage so far, but if u dont want me to show u just say k, keep up the gd wrk

(im not verry good at spelling soz :Nooooooo: )

Keep practising Akeru!

That right lost pariah, you aren't o_O

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Keep practising Akeru!

That right lost pariah, you aren't o_O

lol i forgot but listen k,

i joind a while ago, well, in February but i done tht at my friends house and at tht time i didnt even hav flash k, but i recently got flash so i am new to flash
and i only started useing this site properly wen i got flash so... i am actualy new, u just, cant tell soz :Embarrassed:

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u seem like a nice person ^^ coz i hav seen quite a few of yer posts,

xD, thanks. You should make you're own thread say stuff like "please look at this and crit on it (link here)". But I don't care if you post liike 1 link here.

Looks pretty good. I wasnt a big fan of how the background on the third animation was scribbled on with the brush tool, but how the ground broke in the end mad up for that.

And yes, Kitsune would probably rather you keep that Grayscale entry under wraps. Cant wait to see it when the collab comes out!

I just read, Tolins stick tutorial (nice name lol) and Terkioz's positioning and attack tutorial. I feel empowered know with what wisdom those too crapped out >=3.

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xD, thanks. You should make you're own thread say stuff like "please look at this and crit on it (link here)". But I don't care if you post liike 1 link here.

ok thx ^^ ill hav to post it l8r coz i need to have done 20 posts or somthin? cya around mn ^^:Smile:

ohh just looked at your sword fight link nice wrk i like the like the like shockwave things wen thay clash swords ^^

and just wondering, did u draw tht pic of L for your avatar or did u just find it?

hey mn this is my 21st post so i can show u my animation now ^^ this is my fourth ever animation coz i didnt post my first 3 like u did. tell me what u think Akeru.

http://antiup.net/view/8906/

i also looked at alot of toturials b4 i made this

(OMG i talk alot lol ^^)

hey lost pariah, little tip. since your new here, theres something you need to learn how to use. the edit button. dont double or triple post, use the edit button. if you want to increase ur post count, post in a different thread, but dont just post lots of replies in a row.

EDIT: See, easy.