Parkour (1st animation)

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Jul 13, 2008 9:02 PM #186022
Link : ht tp:// w ww.antiup.net/view/8670/
Project Parkour, my first Flash animation ever.
Give good comments AND RATES ( x/10). Thanks !
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Jul 13, 2008 9:11 PM #186034
Hunter.t.w.e seems to have multiple personalities using T4x4R_O*_Hawk2 and Hunter.t.w.e sharing the same computer. No soup for you! and you! and you!
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Jul 13, 2008 9:12 PM #186037
For a beginner the movement is pretty complex. You gotta work on removing stiffness, on smoothness, on backgrounds (since this is some Shock-style parkour background, pretty simple and fast to do :) ). You also gotta work on the look of your characters, as in their limbs seem not to be held together too good.

For a first ever it's overall good.

By the way... to all the others, this guy is one of my friends in real life. :) I'm helping him progress. :)

Edit : About DeathWish's post above, the situation was cleared. Hunter.t.w.e is another person ! Okay? I just made him the account from my comp because he didn't know how to make one. :) Thanks for understanding, DeathWish!
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Jul 13, 2008 9:34 PM #186055
http://www.antiup.net/view/8670/
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Jul 13, 2008 9:45 PM #186074
realllllly stiff .
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Jul 13, 2008 10:03 PM #186097
Quote from Deathwish
Hunter.t.w.e seems to have multiple personalities using T4x4R_O*_Hawk2 and Hunter.t.w.e sharing the same computer. No soup for you! and you! and you!


You're a clever one, aren't you?

Aerecks banned Slanted because he posted on my computer. It means nothing, and is not worth bringing up, Noobius Moddius. >:o

Noty bad at all for a first. I only suggest studying motions and looking up tutorials more. I also suggest not using shapes to draw backgrounds like ovals and squares. It's clear what you're doing there, and it does not look good.
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Jul 14, 2008 2:13 PM #186962
I forgot to mention you need to work more on physics and you should make those trampolines or whatever they were flex when the guy hits them.

O, and here's a tutorial that can help you with your sf animations, in general : http://www.newgrounds.com/portal/view/397490