RHG Character: Nightstroke/Pete (New Story... Ish)

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Mar 31, 2014 7:46 PM #1182108
[Night[COLOR="#000000"]Stroke[COLOR="#B22222"]][/COLOR][/COLOR]





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Abandoned Pete IMG: (Click to Show)


Age: 45
Color: Black
Eyepatch color: Dark gray
Scar color: Dark red

Weapon: 55 Cal. Magnum (If you use pivot you can get it off of droidz.org) And he will use his fists as a last resort. Don't think he has gentle ones, too.

Abilities: Strength, Fighting moves, agility, and how good with a gun he is.
If he is Abandoned Pete, his strength increases by a little.

The Story Part 1 (Click to Show)
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Weaknesses (Click to Show)


Quote: "My anger, pain, and sadness shall be your death."

Demo 1: http://youtu.be/PkhtR6rSAvM
Demo 2.1: http://youtu.be/ETx-pIqfuzE

Hitlist

Hitlist Info (Click to Show)

The Sensei (ryanjr) Art: http://www.filz.us/files/913d4d96/b62/HTHS.png [/CENTER]
Daytrox (Daytrox) Art:(Unfinished) [/CENTER]

Clan

None.




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Battles: Nightstroke vs. The Sensei (Finished) Won by Forfeit.

Points: Wins: 1 Forfeits: 0 Loses: 0

Availability: [COLOR="#FF0000"]Nope. Battling The Sensei.[/COLOR]
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Mar 31, 2014 8:01 PM #1182112
Good luck with your RHG. Maybe you should do a longer demo when you have time.
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Mar 31, 2014 8:18 PM #1182114
Yeah. This was my Crappy Demo. Hahaha. So, expect a longer demo sometime later. Maybe today, tomorrow, or next week at the most.
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Apr 1, 2014 12:35 AM #1182177
did u base him off DC universes DeathStroke?
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Apr 1, 2014 12:51 AM #1182185
No idea who that even is. I'm not in to Superhero stuff. Or comics :P But, I'll look it up later. And If I find that My RHG is too close to Deathstroke... Ima redo mine. :P
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Apr 1, 2014 12:53 AM #1182186
Nightstroke sounds like a kind of Swimming manuever
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Apr 1, 2014 1:12 AM #1182194
Quote from Hewitt
Nightstroke sounds like a kind of Swimming manuever


It sounds like a poison of some type.
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Apr 1, 2014 1:19 AM #1182198
Quote from Atomicapple
It sounds like a poison of some type.


like nightshade. The nightshade berry. or is it nightlock? something like that...
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Apr 1, 2014 1:29 AM #1182206
Quote from Atomicapple
It sounds like a poison of some type.


that would be nightshade. Night Stroke sounds like something a rich person would do at his penthouse suite private swimming pool.

"I think I shall have a Night Stroke $$$"
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Apr 1, 2014 2:55 AM #1182234
Lul, Hew.

On the actual RHG though, he's pretty simple, basic. Thats not necessarily a bad thing, but try to elaborate on his abilities more, other than giving him a weapon. Say that he's an extremely seasoned/experienced sharpshooter/gunslinger or such. Also, tell people that he has at least Peak Strength, to give some explanation why or how he would be able to rip that Sheriff's jugular out, not to mention his teeth. Also, this is probably just me being nitpicky, since the story is more important in the wRHG section than here, but why would he take out his employer? Any motives? Revelations that he realized about the "Richman?" Again, this is just a nitpick as the actual story has no real impact on the RHG, it just helps set the mood, so you dun need to modify if you dun feel like.

All in all, you got a good basic thing going on, but just expand it a bit.

Good luck with your battles :D
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Apr 1, 2014 4:02 AM #1182251
Quote from Hewitt
that would be nightshade. Night Stroke sounds like something a rich person would do at his penthouse suite private swimming pool.

"I think I shall have a Night Stroke $$$"


Nightstroke: The Claws of HEUGH!!
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Apr 1, 2014 5:29 AM #1182268
Quote from Hewitt
that would be nightshade. Night Stroke sounds like something a rich person would do at his penthouse suite private swimming pool.

"I think I shall have a Night Stroke $$$"
makes me think of someone having a stroke at night time, er nice rhg but you really REALLY should work on your animating before even think of rhg.
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Apr 1, 2014 11:20 PM #1182556
It's pivot... so, don't expect stuff that's like... Wow...
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Apr 2, 2014 5:56 AM #1182643
Quote from ToeNailKnight
It's pivot... so, don't expect stuff that's like... Wow...


The choice of animation program does not excuse anything, Pivot users can so easily be on the level of flash users with practice and things. Have you seen "The Last Fall of Crimson" on youtube? It was made with Pivot, I'm not sure if its fully with Piv, but I'm sure it was most. Also, we have Naberius, a pretty good Pivot user here in SP, checkout some of his things too. Also, quick kicks, the guy who just replied above your post is also a Pivot animator and he makes it look like Flash with how well animated everything, including his angles, are.
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Apr 2, 2014 6:21 AM #1182648
Quote from Nanite
The choice of animation program does not excuse anything, Pivot users can so easily be on the level of flash users with practice and things. Have you seen "The Last Fall of Crimson" on youtube? It was made with Pivot, I'm not sure if its fully with Piv, but I'm sure it was most. Also, we have Naberius, a pretty good Pivot user here in SP, checkout some of his things too. Also, quick kicks, the guy who just replied above your post is also a Pivot animator and he makes it look like Flash with how well animated everything, including his angles, are.


don't forget there's "pivot battles of mars" it was posted in youtube and that is also an epic pivot animation