RHG Character: Nightstroke/Pete (New Story... Ish)

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Apr 4, 2014 3:55 PM #1183844
@Nanite Okay, well, expect a new demo sometime this or next month.

@Jaywi Never heard of it. I'll watch it now.

Would anyone like to be hitlisted? If so, PM me or post a Quick reply with the link to your RHG Character.
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Apr 5, 2014 5:04 AM #1184043
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OMG! I absolutely love this picture. Its amazing! Do you mind if I use it as my new profile pic?
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Apr 5, 2014 2:50 PM #1184161
I don't mind at all. So, yeah you can. :) If you need me to re-size just tell me.
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Apr 5, 2014 5:02 PM #1184195
Awesome... thanks.
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Apr 6, 2014 10:32 PM #1184581
Goodluck with the Battle. Looking forward to see your Completed animation.
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Apr 20, 2014 9:27 PM #1188518
Lul, Hew.

On the actual RHG though, he's pretty simple, basic. Thats not necessarily a bad thing, but try to elaborate on his abilities more, other than giving him a weapon. Say that he's an extremely seasoned/experienced sharpshooter/gunslinger or such. Also, tell people that he has at least Peak Strength, to give some explanation why or how he would be able to rip that Sheriff's jugular out, not to mention his teeth. Also, this is probably just me being nitpicky, since the story is more important in the wRHG section than here, but why would he take out his employer? Any motives? Revelations that he realized about the "Richman?" Again, this is just a nitpick as the actual story has no real impact on the RHG, it just helps set the mood, so you dun need to modify if you dun feel like.

All in all, you got a good basic thing going on, but just expand it a bit.

Good luck with your battles





Okay, thank you for the critique. If I can think about anything else to add to this RHG, I will. So, thank you.
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Apr 21, 2014 12:52 AM #1188548
Nice RHG, Although it could be a little more Complicated than that. But I hope we battle one day when you're available and you want too,GL with your battle!
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Apr 22, 2014 11:58 PM #1189161
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Nice RHG, Although it could be a little more Complicated than that. But I hope we battle one day when you're available and you want too,GL with your battle!


Thanks! Looking forward to a Future battle with you.

(Want me to add you to my Hitlist?)
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Apr 23, 2014 1:45 AM #1189195
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Thanks! Looking forward to a Future battle with you.

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Sure thing bro
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Apr 26, 2014 1:09 AM #1190123
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Sure thing bro


Oh yeah, new thing about my RHG Character. Meet the other side of Nightstroke...
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Apr 29, 2014 1:21 AM #1191014
Awww Yeah. New Story. Dance to that, suckah! Haha.