Clanmate sparring - G0mute/BrommL

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Apr 27, 2014 12:31 PM #1190541
http://krubb.deviantart.com/art/Clanmate-sparring-G0mute-BrommL-450422439?ga_submit_new=10%253A1398601818

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Apr 27, 2014 1:26 PM #1190553
wow. Very good again krubb, I loved it! I can't think of any CnC at the moment...
Shall I add it to your animations?
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Apr 27, 2014 4:34 PM #1190613
I love that fluid line style of yours.
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Apr 27, 2014 4:50 PM #1190615
Quote from Spectre
wow. Very good again krubb, I loved it! I can't think of any CnC at the moment...
Shall I add it to your animations?


Thanks pal, yeah you can add it.

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I love that fluid line style of yours.

I usually doubt my line work, so thanks for telling me!
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Apr 27, 2014 11:23 PM #1190691
*jaw drop* *claps* omg. (the only thing i could cnc would maybe be when bromml is levitating, his hands and feet are a bit awkward in movement). 12.78/10
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Apr 28, 2014 8:28 AM #1190803
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*jaw drop* *claps* omg. (the only thing i could cnc would maybe be when bromml is levitating, his hands and feet are a bit awkward in movement). 12.78/10

Ahh yeah, i can see that.
His arms are awkward, but i believe the legs are done right, i think the issue might be the amount of doubleframing. Thanks for pointing it out breh.
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Apr 28, 2014 2:57 PM #1190882
Smooth stuff as always Krubb. Really like how he pulled out the arrow. To me honestly i thought the levitation part was fine. Overall some really solid work. Cncing this was tricky for me. The way your stick is built is fine, it just seems to not be as flexible as others. Not saying to go and completely change your style, because you do really well with what you have. It's just the spine always stays like |, there is really no curve anytime in his back. To be honest It'd be challenging to accomplish this with that stick build but i think you could pull it off. Basically what i'm trying to say is try to make it a little more loose, flexible. I think it'd really add to your animations, like at the end that roll he did was pretty stiffbeans because of the spine.
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Apr 28, 2014 7:21 PM #1190944
Quote from Ezy
Smooth stuff as always Krubb. Really like how he pulled out the arrow. To me honestly i thought the levitation part was fine. Overall some really solid work. Cncing this was tricky for me. The way your stick is built is fine, it just seems to not be as flexible as others. Not saying to go and completely change your style, because you do really well with what you have. It's just the spine always stays like |, there is really no curve anytime in his back. To be honest It'd be challenging to accomplish this with that stick build but i think you could pull it off. Basically what i'm trying to say is try to make it a little more loose, flexible. I think it'd really add to your animations, like at the end that roll he did was pretty stiffbeans because of the spine.


Thanks for the reply mate. I know what you mean, i do curve the spine though, it's just not as visible as i wanted it to be, i'll try to make it more flexible in the next sparring.
After that, i'll work on getting more used to my tablet again or something like that. Cheers!
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Apr 29, 2014 6:07 AM #1191061
so fluid so amazing @3@ the only thing i could cnc is both of their torso's are too small or is it their legs that are just very long?
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Apr 30, 2014 11:43 PM #1191482
fantastic ! :D