Introducing NINJA K - "First project after moving to flash"

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Jul 15, 2008 3:50 PM #188071
So yeah.. here my first project since i moved on from pivot...
enjoy.rate.bag.

http://img168.imageshack.us/my.php?i...nimtionzg4.swf


just dont be too harsh i only started flash two weeks ago..

i dont think its done.. yet.. we'll see

EDIT: frm the feedback i got i decidedd to practice making a BG so here it is....
http://antiup.net/view/9323/
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Jul 15, 2008 4:04 PM #188082
Fill in the head.
Zoom in more when drawing sticks.
Keep the text up there longer.
Try to add more frames in between so the movement are mroe defined.
Keep the V-cam from going crazy if you were using it.
Look at some effects and movements tutorials so you can get better on that.
Work on your background it sucks.

Wow that was long.
Not bad if you just got flash.

Oh and before I forget,
>>>>>>>antiup.net<<<<<<<<<
Use that to host your flash animations.
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Jul 15, 2008 4:04 PM #188084
Dear god no offense but this sucks, and you need way more sounds. Add me to msn, i got something for you
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Jul 15, 2008 4:21 PM #188100
lol... nah im rite for now. tnx for the feedback..
time to bore myself with moar tuts...
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Jul 15, 2008 4:25 PM #188108
what were they even saying.
if you follow the tutorials you will learn how to do pretty much everything in flash.

"my gawd tat waz supa original! 2 stikz fiting!!!11!" - not directed to u. but to the internet.
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Jul 16, 2008 6:15 AM #189171
yummy---- update ^^^ read up added a bg that i made due to feed back
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Jul 16, 2008 3:25 PM #189423
Wow great!!! atleast for a beginner!
I was not that good, infact
I AM not that... good...keep up your work!!!
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Jul 17, 2008 5:22 AM #190154
yeah please dont make yer sticks talk like "lulz noap iv got moar nubcake" its kinda pointless and annoying and gay... thanks

the anims were ok. i think with ur style theyd look better without the foot lines