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RHG Demo (Very incomplete)

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May 21, 2014 10:38 PM #1197823
http://sta.sh/0l9k28b07c7

This is my new demo for my RHG Landrew, all the other demos I made for him really really sucked IMO. :P I've put more effort into this one, I'm not too sure how I feel about it, I feel kind of rusty because my tablet pen broke and I had to get a new one so I haven't made anything for about two weeks.


Any C&C would be great, I really wanna make a good demo for him. :)
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May 21, 2014 11:27 PM #1197826
If it's incomplete why would you post it?
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May 21, 2014 11:36 PM #1197829
I didn't watch it closely enough to comment on the movements other than to say they looked all right and not obviously wrong. Good speed and timing.

Not a fan of the floating skateboard, but I suppose you kids are all about the telekinesis in your stick fights, nowadays.

Xeno: Personally, I post unfinished animations to get a feel for what I should edit and what direction I should take it to see if I'm making any assumptions from the viewer's point of view. It's always good to get constructive criticism during the animation process while you're still in the mood to edit rather than waiting until afterwards. When I complete an animation I sure as hell am not going back to fix any mistakes unless they are horrible and detract from the rest of the piece.
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May 22, 2014 12:56 AM #1197847
You do that with in private on PM or irc, not on the forums. Anyway the animation looks great imo. Don't focus too much on the technical stuff and just be as creative as you can be... I mean you're animating stick figures for crying out loud... so stay creative and keep doing what you're doing.
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May 22, 2014 7:59 AM #1197932
I posted it for the exact reason that Ogrilla said, I wanna make sure people like this demo, so it would be good to get their opinion on where it should go. My plan for it right now is to have him kill some more zombies and then fight a human to show how he'd look in an actual battle.
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May 24, 2014 5:45 AM #1198473
eventually you'll have to work on getting everything to be all flowy and such because right now it's just pretty stop n go. but for right now right now right here right now, you should work on making some nicer looking blood, That blood you made in this animation was just a couple of dots basically and didn't really look liquidy at all.
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May 25, 2014 6:00 PM #1198921
Not bad, but finish it.
Now I feel like Landrew is very similar to my RHG.
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May 31, 2014 8:51 AM #1200763
Well I had to restart my laptop, so this will never be finished. :( Oh well, thanks for the C&C.
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