Ruban

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May 26, 2014 4:31 AM #1199027
Ruban (pronounced Rooban/en):

Age- Very Old, but has been using his new body for 17 years.

Gender- Identifies himself as male. "... I believe I'd rather be called Frank than a Debbie."

Appearance-

Height varies from 5'2" to 6'7"
Looks like a bunch of cylindrical metal bars joined to metal spheres (nodes) vaguely
formed in the shape of a male human.
The only largely solid part of his body is his head.
His eyes are electric blue.
He weighs 250 lbs
(Note: Although he looks mechanical, he is not a robot. He is an entity with an indestructible body.)

Personality-

Doesn't like to kill, much prefers forcing submission or kos.
A decent, smart person, albeit a bit awkward at socializing.
Takes offense at being called a robot, but most often lets it slide.

Abilites-
Indestructible, but he can (and does) tire.
Can detach parts of his body. After 24 hours, the detached part(s) start dissolving,
completely disappearing after 8 days. He can still move the detached part.
Regenerative: his body regenerates incredibly quickly after detachment, but doing so
tires him. If he is decapitated, his body will regenerate from his head.
He can change his body's shape, taking on other forms/making weapons out of his
body.
(ex. Take the form of a lion, make hammer-shaped fists/sword arms, etc.)
Incredibly strong- can lift up to 17 metric tonnes.
Durable- Can barely take hits from bullets at speeds up to mach 3 without falling apart
Fast- Can reach speeds up to mach 1(max speed) in 60 seconds.
Overdrive mode- When at his prime (blue), Ruban can break his absorption limitation, dropping his surrounding temperature well below freezing and granting him 3x speed, 5x durability, 3x strength, and near-instant regeneration.
Heat-Eater- Ruban obtains his energy from absorbing heat at temperatures above 212*F.

Weaknesses-

Although he is incredibly durable, Ruban tends to auto-detach parts that are hit hard to
avoid being sent flying.
Doesn't really like running fast because he finds it hard to change directions at high
speeds.
The color of his nodes represents how tired he is. White- Overdrive mode. Blue- Prime; in peak condition. Green- Good. Yellow-
Tiring. Orange- Tired. Red- Exhausted. Black- Out. Gold- Resting/Recharging.
Ruban tires rather quickly (If he fights at maximum capacity, he'd last about 30 minutes.), and the longer he fights without resting, the faster his energy drains, so he tends to try to take brief moments to recompose himself in-battle.
Overdrive mode only lasts for 5 minutes, and he blacks out almost immediately afterwards. Also, once he activates this mode, he can't stop it and has to let it run its course. Ruban can't use this mode while in places with below-zero temperatures.
Ruban cannot absorb energy from temperatures at or below 212*F.
He is still susceptible to mind tricks and illusions.

Story-
Ruban was originally an AI for a spaceship ( the Nabur) before a ROB (Random Omnipotent Being), under Ruban's
request, gave Ruban a body. He travels with his "brother" EXC4 (or C4 or Exca), helping him help
his people find their way home.

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Points- 0/1/0/0

Availability- *Passed out and lost. So... Not yet. :P*
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May 26, 2014 5:16 AM #1199040
Beautiful, i love it. Sorta like a mechanical Mr. Pix. If you don't know who that is then for shame lol.
Oh btw, spoilers would be nice, you know [spoiler=Whatever[ content [/spoiler[ in actuality, you just need to use ] for the end.
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May 27, 2014 3:12 AM #1199305
I like the " Punch me!" part of the story.
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May 30, 2014 3:41 PM #1200581
Your character looks good, as far as I browsed over it; I'll probably look into it some more later on but I was wondering if there was anything else to beat him? I dunno, the weaknesses looks like it needs a little more work. Add a little more to it, your aim is mostly that your character is strong enough to possibly hard to beat but has enough weaknesses that could be exploited and he could be beaten~but that's just my opinion, you're free to act on it or not~

Also it'd be nice to have the overdrive description be actually part of your abilities and possibly be a little more elaborated on? I don't know, maybe give an example on how powerful he gets, like what kind of incredible feats he's able to perform within that time period~It should help with any future opponent get a feel on how powerful he can get~

Besides that, good luck in future battles~
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