Here it is.
I tried to make it as fast and yet, as smooth as possible. CnC would be apperciated.
New combat practice
Started by: Jazzon | Replies: 13 | Views: 1,254
Jun 10, 2014 1:08 PM #1204851
Jun 10, 2014 2:59 PM #1204881
Your skills of animating is better than me, mate. :)
Like the movements, and the weapons. But it's still needs an improvement for the smoothness.
Like the movements, and the weapons. But it's still needs an improvement for the smoothness.
Jun 10, 2014 3:50 PM #1204897
Quote from Hanif13Your skills of animating is better than me, mate. :)
Like the movements, and the weapons. But it's still needs an improvement for the smoothness.
Why thank you. I know the smoothenss isn't my best subject and I'll work on it... :D
Jun 10, 2014 4:15 PM #1204904
Both stick are choppy, pretty much all the time. Some poses are kinda weird, they were like too much bend.
Jun 10, 2014 4:35 PM #1204909
Quote from SaintorinBoth stick are choppy, pretty much all the time. Some poses are kinda weird, they were like too much bend.
Yeah, well, making a bit longer combo has it's price, I couldn't always animate the stick I wanted, because I got tired after making similar poses over and over again.
Jun 10, 2014 5:42 PM #1204928
But the outcome is fabulous thing.
Jun 13, 2014 5:16 AM #1206002
this looks alright but that red flash with the camera shake is irritating to watch(imo)
Jun 13, 2014 5:21 AM #1206004
mature content my ass lol but ok over all just a bit choppy
Jun 13, 2014 7:05 AM #1206025
Quote from Phosphatemature content my ass lol but ok over all just a bit choppy
It has blood, guns and blades, but after all... It is a battle anim.. But anyway thanks for CnC.
Quote from Surrakuthis looks alright but that red flash with the camera shake is irritating to watch(imo)
Yeah... I know, I though it would look more exciting before I posted it, but now I see that it gets annoying pretty fast.
Jun 13, 2014 9:15 AM #1206064
I like it. :) It's pretty wobbly, and a bit stop and go, so it could be improved, but it's definitely good. :)
Jun 13, 2014 9:30 AM #1206073
Quote from ILikePurpleI like it. :) It's pretty wobbly, and a bit stop and go, so it could be improved, but it's definitely good. :)
Thanks. Yeah, I guess I do need to practice a bit more :D
Jun 13, 2014 5:37 PM #1206285
Some main things I noticed
-Wobbles were the main thing, for ex. at the point when he goes low and crouches, he just kind of stays there and wobbles back and forth, instead try and make a continuous flow of movement
-A little choppy (you already talked about smoothness before)
-blood effect was just like a tiny little squirt, but I don't think you care much about that now
-I saw some stop and go, it's good to make your actions flow into one another rather than bit by bit if that makes any sense
I liked your force, also I liked the flash on the stickfigs and you're combo was nice and creative. GJ :)
-Wobbles were the main thing, for ex. at the point when he goes low and crouches, he just kind of stays there and wobbles back and forth, instead try and make a continuous flow of movement
-A little choppy (you already talked about smoothness before)
-blood effect was just like a tiny little squirt, but I don't think you care much about that now
-I saw some stop and go, it's good to make your actions flow into one another rather than bit by bit if that makes any sense
I liked your force, also I liked the flash on the stickfigs and you're combo was nice and creative. GJ :)
Jun 16, 2014 6:27 PM #1207711
Quote from JazzonIt has blood, guns and blades, but after all... It is a battle anim.. But anyway thanks for CnC.
This forum has a bunch of 14 year-olds, so it doesn't really counts as mature content.
the arms are pretty short,imo.
Jun 22, 2014 5:18 AM #1209822
you should only use the red flashes for parts when theres like a stab or a deep slash into flesh.
awesome job tho like how u draw the sticks
awesome job tho like how u draw the sticks