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Lobotomizer
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Jun 11, 2014 4:14 PM #1205382
It occurred to me that I don't post my work for fear of showing others the glaring mistakes I've made. Instead of waiting for that one special picture which I'm proud enough to show, I'll just start putting in sketches that I do everyday. Maybe it might clear that fear, maybe it won't. We'll see.

http://i.imgur.com/2BhHkSZ.png

As usual, cnc is appreciated, even if I don't comment.
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Jun 11, 2014 8:02 PM #1205430
Lookin' pretty good, I like your facial style. Only thing I'd say is those bootys lookin' kinda flat in the bottom left. I think her back looks a little too defined and sharp in general, try making it a bit curvier. Everything else looks solid tho
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Jun 11, 2014 8:49 PM #1205440
She has no butt. lol. I love that PivotBlimp noticed :P

I also love your anatomy and face styles. What program are you using bro?
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Jun 11, 2014 9:11 PM #1205448
The heads bother me alot man. Try and just ditch that Animu head
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Jun 12, 2014 8:42 AM #1205677
@Arch: Paintool Sai.

@Mizu: You'll have to elaborate.
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Jun 13, 2014 5:08 PM #1206275
http://i.imgur.com/5gPrXUd.png

Something a little more realistic(?) for tonight.
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Jun 13, 2014 7:45 PM #1206329
Hmm, these feel a bit off. You need to work on that back for sure, get a feel for the curves even if it's a guy. I'm no pro with anatomy, so I can't really go into detail. I know the right guy's face is off, eyes are too wide and the mouth doesn't follow the contour of the face. I'd say just work on your anatomy in general and capturing the illusion of the forms. Adding some shading might help.
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Jun 14, 2014 3:08 AM #1206509
You're art's just good in general, just to get that out of the way. I think your lower bodies could use some attention though, you tend to draw the feet slightly to small compared to the rest of the body (especially with shoes on), and with the body proportions and types you tend to draw they all look to be in their teens or younger unless that was intentional. I suffer from the opposite; the way I proportion my figures makes them look older than I'd like them to be.
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Jun 14, 2014 7:54 PM #1206795
what do you mean "glaring mistakes" ? dang, i hate pros.
by the way, their heads are big. Try to make them a bit little.
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