Hello everybody!
I once started a fanmade story inspired by the RTS Stick Empires (I suppose everyone who reads this has heard about it at least.).
Then I had to realize that I reached the maximal length for a post (100.000 characters), so I'll continue the story from here.
For those who haven't read the previous part yet, here's the link to the site: http://forums.stickpage.com/showthread.php?83293-The-Crawler-Rider-Fan-made-Story
So, the story of Liam Axcer goes on. Enjoy to read, to give criticism or whatever you want to do! ;)
[spoiler="Chapter 10"]Chapter 10: "Surprises"
Liam found himself back on the road and was walking back to the hostel in a mopish manner.
The last hour's events were pure horror for the young Swordwrath.
Not enough that he was told he could die because of his arm's wound.
Now the solution to prevent this improbably soon death caused more trouble than before.
So with some fish he quickly bought for him and Codyn on the market and stashed in his bag, he hurried to his dorm while he remembered the recents events with the council again.
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"W-What do you mean I could die?" he asked earlier towards the council.
"It means what I said" the warlock responded dryly, "every wound caused by wild animals can transfer diseases. Crawlers aren't poisonous as far as we know, but wolves aren't, either. And still, they can transfer rabies for example. In conclusion, there's the possibility that you were infected by whatever the Crawler could transfer. This would also explain your strange kind of Rage Lieutenant Axcer mentioned recently."
Noboby dared to interrupt the speech for the next moments when Odrian finished these explainations, only to continue after a quite long pause.
"Anyways, it's almost an impossibility that you die because of this. We have a lot of time to cure any infections, so the outcome shouldn't be your death, considering that Crawlers aren't poisonous in general. We definitely get you fixed in a few hours. Unless we cannot find the corpse to produce the elixir."
"Thank gods! I almost thought that it would get much worse, sir." Liam blurted out in relief.
Then, all of a sudden, he rethought the last part Odrian mentioned.
"Wait a second." he gasped, "Corpse? Elixir? What is this supposed to mean?"
"It means that we can produce an elixir to cure probable injuries", Mellinna stated firmly, "but for this, we need the corpse of the Crawler to take a sample".
"Apologies for interrupting, but is this really necessary?" Liam's father joined the conversation from his seat. "I mean, can't you just take a sample of any Crawler? We surely have some essences of random Crawlers in the storage rooms, don't we?"
Some of the other members gave approving glances towards him before shifting their gazes in high expectation to the mages.
To their misfortune, the mages shook their heads.
"We only stored any samples of our known poisonous foes for the purpose to produce antidots." the Meric's leader explained, emphasized by Odrian's following nod of approval.
"And next to herbs and potions we never had a use for anything concerning Crawlers."
"And the fact that any Chaos armies retreated recently brings us to the conclusion that the slain Crawler is the only source for a sample!?" the usually inactive but listening Shadowrath's leader chimed in.
"Correct" the sorceress confirmed and turned to Liam again, "like he said, the Crawler is the only source to get a sample for an elixir. It is still somewhere in the woods, isn't it?"
"Well...you know..." Liam began to explain, but he didn't know what to do next.
He remained silent, but his mind was furiously thinking about a way to end the whole unpleasant conversation. But where and how could he begin?
The Crawler they were talking about was recently in his room in the recruit's hostel sleeping peacefully while everyone was expecting it to be out in the woods. And not alive.
What could he just do to not get into further trouble?
Luckily for him, an idea quickly formed in his mind when the Spearton's leader talked to him.
"My boy, now don't tell us Codyn took the corpse along as a trophy!" the warrior exclaimed in mild disbelief.
"Oh, no, he didn't took it." Liam reassured them. "And I think I can find my way back to the location where it should be. If you want, I can travel right now!"
"Not so hasty, young warrior!" Odrian stated then. "You just returned this morning and it's not even midday. And now you want to leave again? Under these circumstances?"
"Yyyeeeess?!" Liam carefully answered, sheepishness indicated in his voice, only to gain a mild but amused old man's chuckle as response.
"Young one, no need to rush into action!" the old man then reassured.
"We have enough scouts that we can send out to seek the corpse. Besides, there is no valid reason that you should go on your own."
"But I know where it is" Liam blurted out before he could think twice about what he says "I made several signs that I can read best. If I'd go out again to find the corpse, it would be the fastest way to retrieve it."
All council members had to think about the boy's proposal, mostly because they were sceptical about him.
Was he serious about travelling back to that place? Reportingly, he should still be in grief about the recent events: surviving his first fight, almost encountering death and killing his first foe. But no signs of grief were visible on the Swordwrath in front of them. Niclus of course knew it better, recounting the images of his whimpering son he had experienced earlier.
" And besides, it was my fault after all so shouldn't I be the one who fixes his own mistakes?" he added, giving the audience more food for thought.
Odrian himself wasn't sure why the boy insisted to do this task on his own. But no matter if Liam wanted to prove something or do the "right" thing, there were no reasons to deny his plea. That his former mentor once taught him that some matters in this world have to be settled solely by the ones who caused it didn't conflict the boy's plea, either. And somehow, Liam was solely responsible by leaving the castle for a walk the previous day. It was still unpleasant to send this boy back into the outskirts of the castle's territory all alone, though. But the blind Magikill knew how to react accordingly.
"Any objection?" Odrian finally asked into the round, expecting everyone except Lt. Axcer not to reply.
Strangely, even the Swordwrath's leader had nothing else to say when Odrian took a view into his colleagues' faces.
Knowing that nobody had demurs to mention, he sighed half-heartedly.
"Looks like your plea is granted, my boy. But I give you the permission to travel on your own if you agree to one condition..."
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"Great! This is just great." he muttered in his mind, still searching for a loosened loop in the net to escape.
"So now I get an escort, Codyn is actually presumed dead, I need a sample of him,..."
He swung his backpack forward while he continued walking. He then ransacked it, trying to find the key for his room to have it in range when needed. Finally, he grabbed a key like object and pulled it out, revealing the key he was looking for.
"Can this day even get worse?!" he incidentally thought, not noticing the young Meric that was walking in the other direction.
She didn't carry books like last time, but Aleeze was still mentally absent, almost daydreaming, when both collided together. Liam, to his fortune, didn't lose his balance due to the weight of his bag stabilizing him from the impact. On the other side, Aleeze was about to fall due to the strong collision if a hand hadn't grabbed hers in time to prevent it.
Finally recognizing each other, both teenagers' eyes widened in realization for the fraction of a moment. Then Liam pulled to help her standing up, immediately gaining her complaints.
"Hey, can't you watch out?! I'm not interested in always bumping into you." Aleeze complained.
"Same goes for me." Liam countered, "you could have watched out, too."
Both sharply breathed in because of each other's behavior. Then Liam's face relaxed slowly and a small smile appeared on his face. Aleeze's tensions loosened, as well.
"Anyways," she started while a barely noticable blush appeared on her cheeks, "thanks for catching me!"
"You're welcome! But maybe, if you want to, you can thank me by paying next lunch for both of us." Liam then mocked with a wide grin.
"Hey, now don't overreach!" she commented unnerved, but coldly.
"Yeah, sorry! I was just joking anyway." he reassured softly.
"Of course!" the Meric apprentice sarcastically stated. "Say, by the way, is it true that you are infected?".
"Oh, this! Actually it's not that bad, I mean..." Liam answered, but interrupted himself, realizing what Aleeze had asked.
"Wait, why do you know that?" he wondered quite dumbfounded.
"Oh didn't you know yet?" Aleeze wondered about Liam not knowing the recent gossip concerning him.
"There are some rumors recently that spread like a wildfire and involving you."
"There are?!" the young Swordwrath asked in disbelief, only to gain a nod from the Meric standing in front of him.
"Yes, one of the ninja novices visited the temple today and casually boasted of his abilities to spy a council's meeting with some comrades. This is where it started." Aleeze explained, noticing the worried look onto Liam's visage.
"And how bad is it?" said Swordwrath asked further.
"Unfortunately, I cannot tell you that." Aleeze apologized. "Some people are saying that you were doomed or cursed by a Crawler. Others say you gained new superpowers by said creature and yet others are rumoring that you'll transform into a 'Crawler-human-hybrid' soon. The last rumor I heard about twenty minutes ago said that you were banished because of the mark you are wearing now."
"You mean this one?!" Liam said while pointing unconcerned at the sickle-shaped scar on his right arm.
On the other hand, Aleeze's eyes widened at the sight that made her remember last evening's events. She was too distracted that she didn't even notice Liam explaining that everything was fine.
She recognized the scar immediately as the former bite she tried to heal the previous day, but somehow, she missed to heal it completely. She then smiled and silently ask Liam.
"Weird, isn't it?"
"Huh?" was Liam's reply to the sudden and unfitting question.
"It's weird that one wound that wasn't healed properly can cause so much trouble." she explained with a somber voice while her face saddened.
Liam, being quite observant to the people around him, didn't need long to notice what Aleeze was referring to. But he wondered if she was really thinking that it was her fault. And was she really fighting back some tears, as well? Nevertheless, he had to console her.
"Hey", he softly spoke, "it's okay. You don't need to be sorry for it's not your fault after all. And besides, the chances that I'm infected are too low to worry about."
"B-But the gossip. And the remaining scar?!", Aleeze added, her saddened look loosened a bit.
"What about it? If you ask me, the scar is quite nice-looking." Liam responded cheerfully.
The result was quite satisfying. Aleeze didn't need to fight back tears anymore. Instead, she smiled amused and shook her head.
"You can be really stupid sometimes." she stated then, gaining an unnerved look from Liam this time.
"Say," she then continued, "about your proposal how to thank you, I'm actually on my way to the mess halls. Maybe you want to come with me?".
"Thanks for the offer, but I'm actually in a hurry." he said, declining Aleeze's offer to have lunch together. "But what about tomorrow?".
"Okay, tomorrow sounds good." she confirmed and both bid farewell.
When Liam was out of sight, Aleeze noticed a whistling sound emitting from behind her. She turned around to see two of her closest friends that partly overheard the conversation.
"Uh-oh, does there someone fall for the Lieutenant's son?" the first Meric commented playfully while the other one continued giggling.
"Hm, it's nothing. We both just get along well every now and then."
"Of course" Alleze's comrade said sarcastically when the three Merics made their way to the mess halls.
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Meanwhile, Liam found himself back at the soldier's hostel whose amount of inhabitants was low at the moment.
"Well, looks like I was wrong." he thought happily by himself.
"How can this day get worse now?!" the Swordwrath's novice incidentally thought again when he unlocked the door and swung it open, not knowing what surprise awaited him behind it.
He was proven wrong. His day just got worse when Liam saw what happened to the room since he left.
He gazed in shock at the sight of his and Morred's room.
It looked like Chaos would rule over it.
Their cupboards, chairs and table had several scratches, all fabrics from the carpet to their blankets were torn into pieces and Codyn was just about to continue chewing Morred's pillow if Liam hadn't gained his attention by exclaiming the horror he saw in front of him.
"MY ROOM! HOLY...!" he shouted in complete disbelief, gaining unintentionally the attention of the hostel's staff.
Fortunately, Liam already entered the room and the worker was at the end of the corridor, unable to see him. Nevertheless, the man was curious.
"Hey!" he exclaimed through the corridor, "you who just screamed. Is something wrong?"
"Oh, uhm... it's fine!" Liam replied, his voice echoing in the corridor, "I'm just surprised that my roommate really tidied up our room."
For a moment, silence followed and Liam hoped that the man wouldn't further check.
To his relief, this situation never came.
"But no need to scream through the whole hostel" the employee responded loudly.
"There are other people living here. Be more considerate next time!"
"Alright, I'll remember!" Liam finally reassured aloud and closed the door behind himself.
Shortly after done action, he let himself drop, leaning against the door and his backpack already thrown to the ground. He just couldn't believe that Codyn was running riot that immensely within less than two hours. The room was in complete chaos. And although no furniture was broken into pieces, everything was leastly damaged. Codyn himself stopped his rampage against Morred's pillow when Liam entered, only to approach him slowly and curiously afterwards.
Then, recognizing who the Swordsman leaning against the wall was, the Crawler slightly crouched down only to jump onto Liam's upper part of the body.
The cat-like creature then nudged Liam's head curiously with one of his paws.
The Swordwrath would have found this action quite strange and funny, maybe even adorable if his mood hadn't dropped immensely by what havoc Codyn has caused. Instead, he was annoyed by the Crawler's foolings and waved the claw away that was about to nudge against his cheek again.
"Hey...hey, hey, hey, stop, no, would you, hey, Stop it" he then commanded while fighting to keep his stern composure and still disturbed by Codyn not stopping nudgings.
"Okay, enough!" he eventually exclaimed and grabbed the Crawler beneath his forelegs and lifted him up, only to set him back down next to him so Liam could stand up without any problems.
Said Swordwrath then grabbed his bag after Codyn tried to nugde it, as well, probably attracted by the scent of food efusing from it.
With the bag in his hand, Liam sat down on his bed, having his backpack at his right side and Codyn, who followed and jumped onto the bed, on his left side. He sighed and observed the mess Codyn has caused to their room.
"Morred is going to kill me!" he whined slightly, his shoulders shrinking in defeat.
Now what should or COULD he do? Liam had managed to smuggle a Chaos creature into the castle whose corpse were still expected to be somewhere in the woods, his room was devastated by said creature, there was the low chance he was infected with any unknown disease and to top up all the current problems that arose,