metal vs Loore (Forfeit)

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Jul 19, 2014 11:39 PM #1220897

RHG #2
RACKS VS GERU

Here's the battle:

metal's part: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=b_X1L2rGNZc&feature=youtu.be
Loore's part: None

I didn't have any news from him until the deadline. I think he's forfeit:(. Anyways, CnC is welcome:D.

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Jul 20, 2014 2:18 AM #1220938

Deadly ending attack!
Congratz, Buddy! :D

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Jul 20, 2014 2:25 AM #1220939

Thanks Buddy:D!! Yeah, the ending with a deadly attack.

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Jul 20, 2014 3:15 AM #1220944

"not too"? did you mean "tidak juga"?
i think there is no "tidak juga" in english, i think the correct sentence is "its not gonna happen" and you should change "you will lose" into "you gonna lose"
hmm, correct me if i wrong
but the fight is awsome metal!, great job

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Jul 20, 2014 3:17 AM #1220945

Thanks Yalazer!! Yeah, i think i'm bad at english...

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Jul 20, 2014 11:58 AM #1221018

LoL, nice one man. A bit brutal for my taste tho :D
Work a little bit more on the storyboard, other than the movements which need improvement.

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Jul 20, 2014 12:05 PM #1221019

Thanks Jazzon. I will improve the movement, and the other thing:D:D.