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A little 2 uppercut combo. As the title says im looking for some constructive criticism. Thanks :D

Great moves and effect at the end, my only complaint is that it's very short and you didn't show much actual movement- as opposed to those speed shortcuts.

The pose at the first part where he moves/breathes is kinda off, His head should move together with the body.
The feet when he walks during the punches is kinda sloppy and the uppercut is kinda unnatural, it needs more force and the stick looks unbalanced.
Work more on your easing and the smoothness and on basic movements. That's all my CnC

Work on that reaction. The first uppercut didn't look like it connected, and the second one barely. You also have to try and take out unnecessary movements, like the two steps the red guy took before the flying third uppercut thing, or whatever the leg did when he was doing the second uppercut. At some portions your torso becomes longer than the legs, and then it just resizes everywhere.

Good seeing you working hard, but you best not push yourself and just have fun.

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Work on that reaction. The first uppercut didn't look like it connected, and the second one barely. You also have to try and take out unnecessary movements, like the two steps the red guy took before the flying third uppercut thing, or whatever the leg did when he was doing the second uppercut. At some portions your torso becomes longer than the legs, and then it just resizes everywhere.

Good seeing you working hard, but you best not push yourself and just have fun.

I agree about having fun but I'd say it's good to push yourself if you wanna get better

for cnc I think you should work on wobbles and easing. Right now this is just kind of he teleports with into his uppercut twice and then just jumps off. If you're gonna stick with the teleport thing I'd say try and do something like he teleports there and goes from maybe a crouch up to his uppercut to make it look stronger, right now it looks a little weak. Also I might be wrong on this but it looked like you used the same animation for both uppercuts. If i'm wrong then disregard this but if you did I'd say just remember not to get lazy and copy/paste parts.