30 FPS | Combo practice 3

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Aug 3, 2014 3:06 AM #1226206
http://he-is-butter-scotch.deviantart.com/art/Combo-Practice-count-3-30-FPS-Test-472718699?ga_submit_new=10%253A1407034981

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Aug 3, 2014 11:16 AM #1226395
Pretty nice, I liked it. It is as many animations I saw, a stickman making a combo and then making a WTF jump. Guess it fits. Good job.
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Aug 3, 2014 11:28 AM #1226401
It'd be nice to see the entire body moving with each attack. The back stays stiff with each attack, and without the vibrating v-cam it most of them would look pretty weak. You should also work on your feet, because they look too short, and the placement of the fet doesn't stay consistent as it makes your stick look like it's sliding.
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Aug 5, 2014 12:27 PM #1227495
Just like what Smile said, the body's so stiff, that he can't even move or even bend his back even a single frame. Plus, only the vcam is making it more forceful as what Smile said. AGAIN. So try adding more force/impact on those attacks. Though the movements are pretty good/decent. Just keep practicing and you'll get used to the 30fps of yours. :D

So far, I'll be giving you a 7/10 score. So yeah.