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Aug 14, 2014 6:24 AM #1231686
Just practicing. CnC appreciated

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Aug 14, 2014 2:41 PM #1231813
This is cool, what I see often is animations with crazy combos but you can't really see what is happening, however you haven't, which is great.
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Aug 14, 2014 3:07 PM #1231820
Very smooth, but your sense of momentum is a little out. Mostly when he punches, it's not as bad in the second one, but overall they're pretty nice. :)
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Aug 14, 2014 6:42 PM #1231870
Thanks. Yeah. Kinda need to work on my momentum. Don't really know what moves are good after punch, so yeah...
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Aug 14, 2014 7:25 PM #1231903
These look good to me :D
I need to work on my combos as well
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Aug 15, 2014 8:48 PM #1232610
Pretty unique style, looks damn good. Make a full length. :D
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Aug 16, 2014 3:29 PM #1233007
Quote from latranchedepain
Pretty unique style, looks damn good. Make a full length. :D


Thats what I wanna do, but I still need to work on effects and angles. Thanks for good feedback.
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Aug 16, 2014 11:35 PM #1233072
The animation was nice.The only problem here is when the stickman took his first step, it seemed like it jumped without building up force downwards. I think that you have to add more frames at that part in order to show the viewer the indication that the Stickman is actually taking a step. Also, add some momentum...
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Aug 19, 2014 3:49 PM #1234195
Looked pretty smooth to me Nice work!
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