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Aug 15, 2014 11:24 AM #1232413
I'm going to make this thing only with dialogues.

Predator Awakes (Click to Show)
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Aug 16, 2014 4:44 AM #1232775
Continues after Hunter-Predator Awakes episode, this time Predator is sent back to the UNRAEF base. There a new threat is going to happen.

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Aug 16, 2014 8:50 AM #1232913
Clearly, you're not looking for CnC, seeing how you've totally disregarded, not followed and blatantly gone the opposite direction of all the feedback that your first few stories received, that people actually took the time to CnC for you.
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Aug 17, 2014 7:36 AM #1233164
Last time, Predator and Brotherhood went to Haunted Mars once again. Their mission is to bring back the surviving humans on Haunted Mars. Dr.Collins called it as Underworld, and yes, it feels the underworld.

Nightmares Have Gone (Click to Show)

CnC please!
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Aug 17, 2014 10:30 AM #1233182
Welcome to ExterPedia, here you will know about the stuffs mentioned in Hunter, a dialogue story by Wither.

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Upcoming Episode (Click to Show)
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Aug 17, 2014 4:51 PM #1233246
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CnC please!


I was actually going to skip CnC because I knew I found nothing positive about it, but if you are serious about writing, then you need to hear this. This CnC applies to your entire Hunter series. Incompetent writing, lazy characterization, non-existent originality, terrible prose, predictable actions, bemusing plot. Your utter disregard for previous CnC given to you has also made it clear that you have no intention of trying to get better, so I don't want any whining from anyone else that I'm being harsh. It is quite plain to see that almost no effort or thought has gone into a single line. You really need to work on all aspects of your writing, young man, before it actually gets to a point where people can read it without a grimace. I can walk up to a school in my local vicinity and get any 10 year old to write a story that would be better than this. The one redeeming feature about this is that it makes your previous Excalibur series (widely considered to be one of the best examples of how NOT to write a story) look like a masterpiece. The fact that you are making thread after thread of this drivel, and actually wrote an (equally terrible) encyclopedia for it shows me that you HAVE TIME to actually do all this, but you lack the determination or attitude to execute it. Instead of writing 30 completely terrible stories set in the same universe, put that time and effort into sketching out one good short story. Make an effort to get better, and you will get better. Please prove me wrong. I want you to work hard at this, because you have the enthusiasm for it. I want you to show me that you are capable of writing stories that do NOT rank among the worst stories ever written.
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Aug 17, 2014 10:50 PM #1233303
Thanks for the advice Nish.
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Aug 18, 2014 12:19 AM #1233325
After Predator and Brotherhood saves the remaining UNSF Marines on Haunted Mars, they head back home using the portal made by Dr.Collins.
CnC will 'ya?


Winter Apocalypse (Click to Show)
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Aug 18, 2014 12:57 AM #1233338
Since these are all part of the same universe with the same character, could you keep all these stories in one thread like me and Captain Cook are doing?
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Aug 18, 2014 1:02 AM #1233340
Not used to do it. And Winter Apocalypse is here!
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Aug 18, 2014 7:04 AM #1233432
Alright darlin', with this series of yours it's much better to keep it all in one thread; keeps the sectiin clean, also makes your chapters easier to find and most importantly, it doesn't spam the Olit.

Anyways, from now on any further installments will be posted here, and only here. Alrighty? You can probably work out what would happen if you don't.

Have a nice day dear~
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Aug 18, 2014 9:57 AM #1233460
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Thanks for the advice Nish.


Did you even read it or was that your auto-reply mode, WitherBot?

I can't believe you told Devour that you wouldn't stop spamming the Original Literature forum with multiple threads because you're "Not used to do it."
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Aug 18, 2014 11:04 AM #1233474
I'm laughing so fucking hard I think my stomach is going to rip open. This level of incompetence is beyond even my wildest imagination.
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