Eren, i drew him.

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Aug 19, 2014 1:01 PM #1234060
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I don't plan on making any more changes, tips on how to even further my art please let me know.


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Aug 19, 2014 6:22 PM #1234252
Your shading is all over the place, and somehow managed to make the eyes wholly different sizes. Ear is also misplaced.
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Aug 19, 2014 11:01 PM #1234334
I think the ear should be slightly farther in, and the left eye almost the same size as the right, but it looks pretty good.
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Aug 19, 2014 11:06 PM #1234338
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Your shading is all over the place, and somehow managed to make the eyes wholly different sizes. Ear is also misplaced.


Thank you I appreciate the feedback.
??? You too.
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Aug 19, 2014 11:12 PM #1234342
You can't just go putting colors wherever you feel like in an eye, especially if it doesn't blend with the eye or any of the rest of the drawing
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Aug 21, 2014 6:38 AM #1234926
Why?

Thanks for the feedback btw.
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Aug 21, 2014 2:26 PM #1235080
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Why?

Thanks for the feedback btw.


What do you mean why, because it looks bad and it doesn't make any sense, why else
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Aug 21, 2014 3:23 PM #1235129
Why does he have such feminine lips? They look as if faint lip gloss was applied very sloppily.
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Aug 21, 2014 7:13 PM #1235182
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What do you mean why, because it looks bad and it doesn't make any sense, why else

You are right, it doesn't make sense in this instance.

And about the lips, idk man. Mistakes happen. I didn't know what else to do to them, (I suck at guy lips) I didn't wanna leave it blank cause in the anime he has lips. :/
Any tips on lips and color choice would be greatly appreciated. No I don't need a lecture on color, rather how to apply it to a face in a painting software.

Edit: Made a couple changes to him. Didn't mess with the ears or eyes. But I did fix glossy lip thing and the random colors in his eyes.
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