[wRHG] Tristan Kenius, the Shadow Walker

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Sep 30, 2014 11:53 AM #1247976
Name: Tristan Kenius

Member of the Family: Talos

Alias(es): Kenny, TK, Neo, Ken, Shadow Walker

Theme Song: We Made This War

Appearance: He wears a black coat, a torned black cape, he also wears a black gauntlet known as the Will of Courage. He wears a black pants and a pair of Wargazer Army Boots. He have a black hair and blue eyes. He always carries a sword known as the The Fallen Eyeand a dagger known as the Earth's Shadowat his back and a revolver-like gun, Arcadus VI.

Equipment:
-Will of Courage: Tristan's black gauntlet that channels his Warblaze energy to his hands. The gauntlet not only channels his powers, but it also increases his strength.

-The Fallen Eye: A sword given to him by his Archaron ancestor, Conrad Raddi. This new sword replaced the old one in Dark.Side Chapter 3. The sword is a black sword and have a silver handle.

-Earth's Shadow: A dagger capable of summoning dead Archaron soldiers to fight alongside Tristan.

-Arcadus VI: A red cased revolver-like gun that has 8 bullets. It has a great accuracy and customizable.

Personality: A lone wolf, this Wargazer class troop always carries mission on his own. His only companion is his Archangel Bot.. Tristan loves only one person, Lia Adrien. If Lia is injured, Tristan will use his Warblaze energy to make him stronger but for a few minutes only. After he uses his full strength, he will be weak. He does not like using his powers frequently.

Abilities:
#1: Warblaze Energy- The energy that is infinite, the energy that is used by the Leader himself. Warblaze energyncan only be used by the Knight Army. Wargazers, Venturers, Collosus, Assassin and Templar classes possesses this energy.

#2: Void Runner- An ability that can be used with the Warblaze energy. Aim anywhere with your hand, channel the Warblaze throught it and collect it, then shoot it and it will create a wormhole that sucks in any entity into the vacuum of space. This ability can only be used once more after 10minutes.

#3: Blazing Wrath- Only a few Knight Soldiers can achieve this ability. This ability can only activated when someone is angry and channels the Warblaze throughout his entire body. It will increase the speed and strength of the user. Even its agility is increased. After this ability is used, Tristan becomes weak for a moment because of the huge amount of energy he uses.

#4: Repeller- Tristan will shoot a small amount of Warblaze energy to repel his enemies away. Ability cooldown is 5 seconds.

#5: Your Mind Belongs To Me/Stealer of Sanity- This ability enables Tristan to control a person's mind or stealing their sanity. Tristan's Warblaze types are Wrath and Wraith. However, using this ability will make Tristan tired after using it a single time.

#5: No Eyes Can See Me(Invisibility)- No Eyes Can See Me is a cloaking ability that enables Tristan to be invisible for 1 minute.

#6: Come to My Aid- Tristan will use his dagger to summon his dead Archaron ancestors to fight alongside him. However, it will die in 3 minutes or killed.

Allies:
Archangel Bot- A special bot designed by the White Council's Leader only for Tristan. The Archangel Bot is a small flying bot not bigger than a tennis ball. The Archangel Bot can revive its master, warns its master and gives him new abilities through battles.

Lia Adrien- A young woman just as the same age as Tristan, 24. Lia is a Venturer class of the Knight Army and is Tristan's love interest. In fact, she also have feelings for Tristan. Lia's Warblaze can heal any of her comrades. Always carries a Crossbow Pounder and a sword known as the Edge of Earth.

The Leader of the White Council, Samaron- A wise leader who always wear a white mask. Samarus is the 440th Leader of the White Council. He possesses a Edge of Venus, which is a dagger and a Phantom XI gun. This is a leader that you don't want to mess with.

Conrad Raddi- Tristan's Archaron ancestor. Tristan have a human side and an Archaron side. Conrad is killed during their planet's Final Stand. Conrad joins with Tristan in Chap.3. He wants to have revenge on Dariel Lucius, the leader of the Darkside for killing the Archaron bloodline of Tristan.

Marius Talos- The uncle to Tristan, a brother to Orar Talos and a cousin to Arthain Talos. Cap.Marius is famed because of his bravery and skills as a Templar. Marius fought with Orar until his brother dies. Marius is the one who raised Tristan, trained him and teach him the ways of a Templar Class Soldier.

Arthain Talos- He made his debut appearance in FF: Sacrifice by acutelatios. Arthain is a skilled assassin who always use the advantages of his surroundings. Arthain is also known as the Lurker Behind Shadows and he is the co-leader of the Talos family clan and lead the clan alongside Marius.

Backstory:
The Wild Ones are Borned (Click to Show)


Weakness: Tristan does not excel at shooting long range enemies. He also can't fight close range without his sword, but he can still fight with his gauntlet. He is agile but you can slow him down using telekinesis by throwing huge stones at him :D. Also, if you have rapid firing guns, shoot at him, he can't block every bullets.

Demo:
Venturing the Wild Lands of Old Earth (Click to Show)


Battles Won/Lose/Forfeit:
0/0/0

Availability: The Wargazer is ready!

Updates Done

  • Day 11 Update
  • Rhtym of A Legend
  • Darkness Are Here
  • Enhanced Soul
  • Warrior of a Soul
  • Ascend for Redemption
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Sep 30, 2014 12:22 PM #1247982
Wow. Telekinesis. Everybody must've had that. Anyway, want me to be your debut battle?

Also, personality other than his lone wolf-ness? What does his face look like?
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Sep 30, 2014 12:36 PM #1247984
Oh his face, kinda like Nero from DMC4.

Personality is going to update.

And.. Why not Xate?
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Sep 30, 2014 1:07 PM #1247992
Hmm, interesting character but I think it needs a little more work. And the fact that you missed out on the backstory/history section of your character is a bit telling to that. You need that so people here can delve a little more to his character. Without it I still can't accept him into the Hall or let you fight.

Anyways, not many of us here have telekinesis as our gladiator's powers, which is what Xate tried to say in his first sentence. It's just a bit situational is all; there should be other ways to defeat him or at least weaken him.

What is this Warblaze energy? Does it come from the surrounding area around him? Does it run out (which you could use as a weakness since it is not infinite and he can't use it too often, but that's your call)?

Also you should explain this Lia character a little bit as well. Is she a companion character, or his love interest? Does she come with him in fights? Does she help him in battles? Who exactly is she? I mean, you don't have to give out all her details immediately, but at least give us a rundown of her character if ever anyone wanted to include her in their battles against you.

That's all I feel that you need to work on~besides that he's interesting, just write his history and consider my suggestions and we'll be square~
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Sep 30, 2014 2:06 PM #1248023
Done :D.. I think I'm using this for my comic..
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Sep 30, 2014 2:28 PM #1248031
Okay then~also I was wondering what exactly Blazing Wrath does, as well as feeling concern with Void Runner~

Concerned because that's pretty OP (overpowered), at least to me. I mean, it can suck in any entity into the vacuum of space? And the fact that Warblaze energy is infinite? That's sort of sure win if he uses it enough to corner his opponents and just ship them off into the heavens. Maybe balance it out with that it only lasts for a limited amount of time? Maybe it could only form when it's on a solid surface?

I don't know, that's just me~
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Sep 30, 2014 2:31 PM #1248032
Oh, Tristan does not use his powers that much. Because he believes "Powers are only for desperate situations"
Blazing Wrath only lasts for a few minutes.
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Sep 30, 2014 2:37 PM #1248035
Then you should include that in your profile~

Also, what does it do exactly~?
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Sep 30, 2014 2:41 PM #1248038
It increases your strength and your speed. Even your agility.
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Sep 30, 2014 3:36 PM #1248062
Okay then! Well good luck and take care deary~
*gives you a cookie*

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Oct 1, 2014 12:43 AM #1248227
Thanks acute!
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Oct 1, 2014 10:31 AM #1248376
So , when will you want to submit the battle? I prefer 3 weeks from now. Deal?
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Oct 1, 2014 11:07 AM #1248396
Nope, 5 weeks. 'Cause I have to deal with my final examination of the year. And that's a deal.
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Oct 2, 2014 12:08 PM #1248784
Double Post: Day 11 Update

Day 11 Updates!
-Added: The Leader of the White Council, Samarus
-Added: Tristan's new ability, Repeller

Day 11 Announcement
"Read the story behind Tristan's Wargazer story. The story that shaped him into a great Knight and will become a legend to all"
~The Holder of the Book of Warriors
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Oct 3, 2014 1:46 PM #1249255
Rythm of A Legend Update

Added Tristan's Theme Song, We Made This War.