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Proton (Currently Unavailable: Small Hiatus)

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May 23, 2015 2:45 PM #1364970
Just so you don't have to double post. The story makes perfect sense and all so don't change it because of this comment. But it's a bit ironic that the group that abducted him searches for people to make gladiators and that he became one to get revenge on them.
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May 23, 2015 2:53 PM #1364974
Quote from Urako
Just so you don't have to double post. The story makes perfect sense and all so don't change it because of this comment. But it's a bit ironic that the group that abducted him searches for people to make gladiators and that he became one to get revenge on them.


I actually already changed the research group and its motives, before you even posted that comment..so yeah.

UPDATE

Added to his personality, changed his hair color, and also edited his Weaknesses slightly(number of seconds).
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May 23, 2015 3:15 PM #1364980
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I actually already changed the research group and its motives, before you even posted that comment..so yeah.

UPDATE

Added to his personality, changed his hair color, and also edited his Weaknesses slightly(number of seconds).


Promise me you're not going to change anything in the middle of a battle.:p
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May 23, 2015 4:45 PM #1365004
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Promise me you're not going to change anything in the middle of a battle.:p


XD I only changed my character a lot now is because it was created almost 8 months ago, so as you can see some things changed in my mind.
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May 23, 2015 6:57 PM #1365030
UPDATE

Proton is currently Unavailable (battling Crank)
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May 23, 2015 7:45 PM #1365035
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UPDATE

Proton is currently Unavailable (battling Crank)


Quick tip: You can put the availability of your gladiator in the title, if you like. Just edit your original post, go advanced, and then you can edit the thread title. Just in case you didn't know.
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May 23, 2015 9:07 PM #1365053
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Quick tip: You can put the availability of your gladiator in the title, if you like. Just edit your original post, go advanced, and then you can edit the thread title. Just in case you didn't know.


thanks for the tip.

-EDIT-

UPDATE

added to his abilities. also changed the color of the Electron Effect to blue, and (slightly) the way the Electron Effect appears when used

Also changed the name of the organization that experimented on Proton to A.T.O.M.
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May 27, 2015 7:46 AM #1366006
UPDATE

Added a fanart section, heh believe it or not.

EDIT:

Added a little bit more explanation on his abilities : I went into more details about how Proton "repulses objects" mostly how the action of doing so looks from a spectator's point of view.

2nd EDIT:

Added a "Swordsmanship related" section in his abilities.

Added a "Habits/Hobbies" section to his personality.

Added a "Techniques" section to his abilities, doesn't change much just makes the abilities section look more neat and goes more into detail about his "repulse objects away" ability that originally was only briefly mentioned in the abilities section.
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