Now, keep in mind that I've turned off my inner editor for the most part. I haven't gone back and refined any of the scenes, that doesn't come until after the 30 days are up. The month is about just completing it , and after is when you fully revise it. Even so, I would love some CnC as normal, possibly suggestions on what scenes to add in or take out as the novel progresses, or maybe just ways to make my writing have more flare when I go back and revise it. Anything is welcome, with the knowledge that this is far from a finished piece.
Also, for those who don't know a working title is just the title someone uses when writing. I don't really like that title to use for the actual novel.
So, without further ado, here it is.
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And suddenly, the dark room was flooded with a bright orange hue.
The lantern in the corner of the room lit brightly, curved and jagged shadows representing monsters hiding behind them and the broken dreams of men. The center of the room was exposed to the most light coming from the tendrils of constant fire, trying to reach out from it’s confines and expand across the dank and dirty room. There sat a man on his knees, his hands tied behind his back with crudely cut rope, yet knotted with a complexity that he could never begin to fathom. He was shirtless, his golden tan glowering against the flames. He was a simple farmer man. One who would tend to his gardens under the merciless sun, and had some muscle to him, although not an overt amount. The next thing that he knew, he was thrust from his comfortable bed and in this dimly lit room. A rag was stuffed into his mouth, meaning his nose was the only way he could possibly breathe. Because of that, he could smell everything; the death, the blood, the gore, the body odor. He had to force back a dry heave as all of these smells intermingled into one, intolerable stench.
In the darkest corner of a room was another male, standing idly in his favorite place; the shadows. His body was sickly thin, and he looked as though he was a recovering anorexic. As he craned his head upwards, the man in the center realized that his eyes were the same color as the shadows he was residing inside of. Gingerly, he stepped out from the shadows and allowed the light from the lantern to hit his features. He was as pale of a man that had ever been witnessed, and his face was virtually unblemished, with the exception of one, elongated scar from his eye to his jaw line. A straight face was plastered on Sirius Nightshade as he jerked his head to the prisoner, locking eyes with him.
“I used to believe that I was human,” He continued, a light snarl in his tone now, “That I was mortal, like the rest of you filth. I used to think that I did not have a purpose. It would haunt me in the night, as I cringed at the fact that I was nothing but a humanoid scum of the earth.”
His lips curved into a deep smile, his pitch black hues twinkling with delight as he started to circle around the imprisoned man, pacing. “But then, one fateful day in autumn I came to the realization that I was a superior being. A god among men. A wolf amongst the sheep. A sociopath among ‘normal’ people.”
The farmer was yelling into his rag, pleading that he be let go, and he wouldn’t say a word. Not that it would matter if he did, he was standing in front of the dictator of this new world. If he said anything, he would simply be executed anyway.
“Naturally, I no longer craved to adhere to the laws that held back this species’ barbaric nature. I no longer wanted to be imprisoned under laws. I began to make myself known amongst the people, informing them of my cause and picking the winning side. My group turned into a faction, my faction turned into a militia, and my militia transformed into a full-scale army, and that was when the fun part came!”
Suddenly, Sirius turned on his heels and crouched until his face was only inches from the farmers. Their eyes locked, and the man could see into his dictator’s dark, depressing soul. The maniacal thoughts that showed in his eyes, siphoning his energy from his body until it was a husk of what it used to be. “Full scale war followed. Slowly, but surely, I took over every country. Italy, Poland, France, Korea, China, India, they all fell under my cold grasp! Soon, I had a large enough army that I was simply the leading tactician in battles, and never had to get my hands dirty!,” his eyes became wild with delight and glee as he seemed to be trembling with adrenaline, all from simply telling his story of how he conquered the world.
“It wasn’t very long before my ten year conquest of the entire world was completed. I was the sole dictator, the immortal man that everyone had to bow down to!”
The farmer felt Sirius’ cold, pale hand clasp on his broad shoulder. At first, it was simply the tingling of ice on bare skin. Then, pain began to shoot from his shoulder all the way down to his arm. As he looked down to his body, his eyes became wide with shock as his skin was decaying before his eyes, rotting with a sickly green and black color as flakes of it fell off like dysfunctional snow.
“You see, young man,” Sirius continued, undeterred by the fact that he was rotting away his prisoner’s arm, “I’m telling you this so that you know why I am the leader of this new nation. This new world, with the Americas and other overseas countries obliterated by our nuclear weapons. Where we are simply a smaller Pangea. It was not from sheer luck. No, it was from skill.”
He took his hand from the man’s arm, and as the farm worker looked down he could see in horror that where Sirius’ hand was withheld nothing but bone. Muscle and skin had fallen off in the immediate radius of the spot, and all over his arm were symptoms of the painful necrosis.
“I have the war tactics of Napoleon Bonaparte, but not the dysfunctional ego. I have the insanity of Maximillien Robespierre, but I do not have the miscalculations. I have the values of Adolf Hitler, but I do not have the cowardess. I am every beneficial quality of every dictator mixed together in a melting pot that is called my mind! I am your SAVIOR. YOUR GOD”
Emphatic passion was stirring in him, as his movements became erratic and unpredictable. He once again began to tremble in the adrenaline rushing through his cold blue veins, throwing his head back in laughter as it echoed around the damp room of death and loneliness. It seemed like it was an eternity before Sirius finally was able to contain himself, jerking his head forward once more toward the prisoner.
Sirius lifted his arm and made a slight, almost unnoticeable gesture with his hand. Moments after, a door the farmer had not seen up until now opened, allowing in bright light for the first time. Relief washed over him as he began to think that maybe the torture was finished and he would be allowed to go back to his wife, children and the rest of his family. However, as another male walked in, all of that hope deflated into a blessing that would never come.
He was, assumingly, a doctor. He wore the same light-blue colored outfit, with a mask covering his mouth and nose. However, the blue outfit and mask were both dotted with specks of crimson red blood. He wore thin-rimmed spectacles and in his hand was a large needle, filled with an orange-colored liquid. He did not know what substance was in the needle, but he was sure it could not be anything beneficial to his overall health.
"Start the experiment," he told the doctor, "Let's see if this one works."
As the doctor moved closer to the man and Sirius stood upright once more, the farmer began to struggle against his restraints. He didn’t want to be a guinea pig, he didn’t want to die. Not this way. Not this young. He began to scream into his rag, biting on it. He could feel the skin on his hands scraping away as he struggled against the complex knot. He tried to stand up, tried to do anything to stop the madness that was circling him, suffocating him.
Suddenly, a black combat boot to the face stopped any momentum he was gaining in one moment.
The male fell to the ground like a sack of bricks, back first as he let out a groan of pain. His vision had now become dotted, but he could make out the figure of Sirius still.
“The moral of the story, young man…” Sirius said as he walked toward the bright lights outside of the doorway, “Don’t throw a kitten to a pack of wolves.”
As the doctor poked the needle into the male’s forearm, he felt a stinging sensation as Sirius looked over his shoulder, the smile on his face everlasting. He could feel his body going into sudden convulsions, a horrible burning spreading through his torso. Yet, he was still focused on the form of Sirius Nightshade. His ruler. Everything was becoming black, and yet he managed to hear the last portion of Sirius’ sentence.
“Or that kitten may turn into a hungry, desperate lion.” [/SPOILER]
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Now, smoke billowed up from factories, polluting the blue skies and turning it into a dreary grey coloration. The streets were lined with unattended garbage and dirty homeless men and women, begging for just one dollar. Roads were filthy, and most buildings were wrecked and close to falling apart. Atop of skyscrapers were gargantuan televisions, showing pre-taped propaganda by Sirius Nightshade himself. Males adorning different colored bandanas walked the streets with plasma guns in their pockets and powerful knives in their boots. In this destructive future, it seemed as though everyone had to carry a weapon just to feel safe from harm. Gang wars ran rampant across the cities, Nightshade officers did nothing to stop the heinous acts being committed even as crime rate skyrocketed. The only time the officers would even consider intervening would be when someone was even suspected to be talking badly about their ruler. France had gone from a residential tourist attraction, to one of the worst places to be in this new world.
On the outskirts of France was a small town, an almost unidentifiable dot on the map because of it’s utter unimportance to French society. The only thing it was good for was border patrol, because there were many people that wanted out of this place.
Most of the houses in the town were practically in ruins, their walls nothing more than the structures holding the home together. Windows were shattered, and doors were kicked off of their hinges. The inside would smell of waste and have an intolerable stench of death. This was the stereotype of most French homes, with the exception of the high standing officers.
While the rest of the town followed this social norm, there was one house on 4th street that did not. Yes, the house’s foundation was crumbling and yes there was the occasional shattered window. Yet, every time a window shattered it would be fixed. The outside walls would be cleaned, and on the inside was a spic and span home of two. Easily the cleanest house by far.
In the kitchen and seated at the mahogany table were the home’s inhabitants. There was Emily Hayden, a violet eyed beauty with charm and a hatred for the way in which Sirius has ruled this world. She had supernatural powers that she had spent time refining, but she had never used it in combat. Not yet, anyway.
Then there was Cyrus. He was never told his last name, nor did he remember anything else about his past aside from that. He was a tall and muscular male in his early 20s, long dirty blonde hair falling to his upper back. He had an unblemished face, but his crackling green hues were by far his most charming physical feature. He, like Emily, was emphatically against the rule of their dictator, and longed to be able to put a stop to the madness. Even more, he longed to know more about his family. Emily had told him that one spring morning she opened the door to see Cyrus, naked and lying down on the dewy grass. The first thing Cyrus had ever remembered was him awakening on a bed of straw, looking out from his room to find Emily cooking breakfast for the both of them. That was three years ago.
Now, Cyrus was poking idly at the eggs on his plate with his fork as he stared up at the small television that everyone was required to have. A newscaster was announcing that Sirius was bringing more troops into the country in an attempt to thwart any possible threat of revolt. He let out a sigh.
“In relation to the increase of troops,” The reporter continued cheerfully as he nodded his head toward the video behind him. Cyrus almost choked on the lone piece of egg he had eaten for breakfast as he saw their Town Square. People were cheering, but it wasn’t out of passion; it was out of fear. The Court of Nightshade officers had brought four people, two men, two women, to the wooden stand, and Cyrus watched in disbelief as these people, one of them his coworker, were tied with a noose and hung in front of everyone.
“More deception in the town of Mater,” He said, “The officers have successfully captured four more treacherous scoundrels and they were readily hung. However, they know that there are still more people wishing to revolt. They vow to hunt them down and do the same that they did to these four.”
As the newscaster turned to weather, Cyrus looked down at his plate. It seemed like even if a person said they didn’t like something Sirius was doing, they were hung for treason. Every room of every building was bugged, and the police officers listened intently to every one. They salivate with hunger as they look for a person to slip up. To them, killing is their dream job. And here Cyrus was, eating food and staying out of everyone’s way even though he wanted to see people be happy once more. What was he really doing?
“Cyrus?” Emily’s concerned tone pulled Cyrus from his daydream, as he jerked his head toward her, where she pointed to her plate, “You’ve barely touched breakfast. You gotta eat.”
Cyrus was silent for a moment, looking down once more as his fork stabbed into the scrambled egg, tearing a chunk from the whole piece and plopping it into his mouth. He wasn’t hungry, but he didn’t want Emily to be worried.
“It’s that news story, isn’t it?”
More silence.
Emily placed a comforting hand on Cyrus’ shoulder, smiling at him, and yet being deadly careful of what she said, “It’s going to be alright.”
Cyrus and Emily both knew that their house was bugged, just like everyone else’s. So, instead of reading Emily’s lips, Cyrus was always forced to read her eyes instead. Her lips said a simple sentence of attempted comfort. Her eyes, however, told him that those officers were going to pay one day for their sins against humanity. One day, someone would stand up and fight for the people. Maybe it would even be them that did so. However, today wasn’t the day.
Cyrus let go of his fork, allowing it to clank against the metal plate. He lifted his free hand to