What I'm seeing in those two animations is that although your movements are indeed smooth, they don't seem to have any character behind them. What I mean by that is your sticks look too much like they were made to move rather than "he's moving." This is probably a biproduct of pivot, since that's literally how you animate but that's besides the point. In the second animation, he does a textbook walk in, and then opens the suitcase, and it's all animated well, although the walk looked a little jittery, you might have double framed where you didn't need to, but there's no life to it, it seems kinda dull. Same with your hits, there's not a lot of force behind most of them, and although they're smooth and flow kinda well together, it just doesn't seem like how someone would realistically preform those actions and the sticks movement doesn't seem very lively despite doing a very active action like punching. But that's really all I can say man and it really boils down to being a nitpick, you seem to have your basics down and you do a very good job on these, keep it up

Ayy, big update since i wasn't active here.
Movin dots and shit.
http://i.imgur.com/ATf...
Smooth walk and shit
http://pivottube.pl...
Tryin out them sexy custom pistols made for me by Waffles.
http://i.imgur.com/1UvxXDZ.gif
Preview of a relatively long thing that i've been struggling with for a few months
http://pivottu...
Also another preview of a joint with two guys from TDD
http://i.imgur.com/1bROGL6.gif

Hey Flame, glad to see you here.
Anyway, your movements are really smooth, but maybe too smooth. It makes those movements seem unreal
Good job tho

Nice shit flame.

That looks pretty damn good. I don't think I need to criticize anything since you are so much better than when you started it. Some of those poses are pretty weird, though, tbh.

Update yet again.

Ragdoll shit cc pls k thx

If a real person got there fist stuck in a ceiling they wouldn't wave around so much, but it's a "ragdoll" Thing so i guess you did that on purpose. Nice animation though, your pretty good at pivot.

Ey flame. Nice stuff you got here. I have to say it looks nice, but I can't get how his body curls up and then springs up. To me, it seems unnatural but that might just be my eyes.

updat

update cunts and cuntettes

triple post sue me.

Smooth af man. Ever thinking of switching over to Flash? It's more flexible. (If not that's cool)

I think I actually saw the one with the giant purple guy before. You been on A16's stream?