Quote from IpmanNicely done!
CnC:
Nice work on the angles and such man! the movement's were smooth, although when the angle goes to the part where he runs, i just dont like how the hands look like at times, like when one arm looks like it's small like this:this (Click to Show)
But it's not a really big deal..
Effects need work, like the blood, smoke, ice and particles, but so far, it looks like you've improved with effects.
I like the angle part where you raise your hand and make ice, looks neat, well done.
Now what bothers me next is the part where Bio gets thrown so far and falls, cause it seems odd, really odd, first, the way you threw him looked like he was just a piece of doll because he had no weight or something like that, then second is his fall. At first he was spinning clockwise, then suddenly stopped to turn counter-clockwise.. work on that
so far, that was great! although for me, it needed more longer fight scenes cause it seems like they weren't even trying to defend lol.
All in all i'd go for a 17.4/20 :>
Statistics:
4.2 - for the cinematics
8.4 - for the fight and movements
5.8 - for the effects
Great work Atsuke!
Thanks for gimme very much critic.. Im appreciate that
For blood i still practice make that. Smoke and explosion too
Fight scene too short ?? Yep i think i must still learn to longer that ;>
And yes you right about throwing cide.. I think he lost his weight lol
And thnks for gimme statistics.. I will try harder.. Thanks a lot ip ;^)
Quote from BioMegawhy all the tryouter make Cide looks weak ;_;
its nice tho! but that scene when Cide is falling down, need work. 87.
Cuz Fenrir too strong ;^) jk
Thanks m8;^)