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Aug 4, 2015 12:41 PM #1391460
Hope you like It! this one kinda took me about a week? I took my time :P also sorry for the freezes that you may encounter In the animation...My computer Is just terrible.
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Aug 4, 2015 1:19 PM #1391467
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Hope you like It! this one kinda took me about a week? I took my time :P also sorry for the freezes that you may encounter In the animation...My computer Is just terrible.


Not bad. The movements were pretty decent and clear for me, but it seemed like as if there wasn't much force that is being applied to each stick to another. I wish you could've made it a bit longer considering that you have a lot of free time because we currently have no deadline just yet. So if I were you, I'd improve some of those errors to get a better chance of getting in.

If I were to rate your tryout, I'd give it a 7.5/10. Now, any more applicants that are tryouting for our clan?
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Aug 4, 2015 1:51 PM #1391475
Thanks for the CnC! and yeah I always encounter that force problem...But I get worried that If I add more force then It would look more choppy.I might be able to finish It soon, but I cannot guarante that there will be sound effects.
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Aug 4, 2015 2:25 PM #1391488
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Thanks for the CnC! and yeah I always encounter that force problem...But I get worried that If I add more force then It would look more choppy.I might be able to finish It soon, but I cannot guarante that there will be sound effects.

Don't be afraid to try some new stuff out dude, if it looks weird, re-edit it, you might think it's gonna be a waste of time, but actually, it improves on how you think and do stuff. Anyway Good Luck on it bro.
CnC:
- There are some wobbles and shakyness here and there, like the part where Trevor tries to gain momentum for the double knee.
- For me, you got most of the spacing and force done. Though when he does the first knee attack, it didn't have much force (which is should have.) Rather than the second knee attack.
- The part where Trevor's boss jumps after he got knocked back just didn't make sense since it looked like he did an effortless jump, if he had some spacing between the part that he jumped, and before the jump, then I think it will look fine. Ya feel me?
- This is just a side note but, you really got me waiting for that part when the boss guy flipped, I just really love flips.
- Smooth as fuccccckkk, gr8 job mang.
- The attacks are really well done, though would be much fun if it was longer.

Great job once again man! Good luck to you.

@Castro
Yeah, been a while since the last update, I hope both Xand and Styrx update us with their tryouts, I've been waiting a while.
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Aug 4, 2015 3:02 PM #1391499
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Don't be afraid to try some new stuff out dude, if it looks weird, re-edit it, you might think it's gonna be a waste of time, but actually, it improves on how you think and do stuff. Anyway Good Luck on it bro.
CnC:
- There are some wobbles and shakyness here and there, like the part where Trevor tries to gain momentum for the double knee.
- For me, you got most of the spacing and force done. Though when he does the first knee attack, it didn't have much force (which is should have.) Rather than the second knee attack.
- The part where Trevor's boss jumps after he got knocked back just didn't make sense since it looked like he did an effortless jump, if he had some spacing between the part that he jumped, and before the jump, then I think it will look fine. Ya feel me?
- This is just a side note but, you really got me waiting for that part when the boss guy flipped, I just really love flips.
- Smooth as fuccccckkk, gr8 job mang.
- The attacks are really well done, though would be much fun if it was longer.

Great job once again man! Good luck to you.

@Castro
Yeah, been a while since the last update, I hope both Xand and Styrx update us with their tryouts, I've been waiting a while.


-Yep I always seem to find that problem In my animations xD also that's actually not a double knee It's a knee kick and a kick xD
-Thanks I'll try to not make that mistake happen again :3
-Roflmao Ikr I just wanted him to jump like a frog lel
-The animation froze...
-yay :D
-I noticed that when I re-watched the animation. And I said ,''Oh crap...I talk more than I do things lol''

Ya know the only reason I'm trying so hard to improve as fast as I can Is so I could fight you as soon as possible :D
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Aug 5, 2015 2:31 AM #1391654
Program :
Your tryout kinda AWESOMM, so smooth and nice sfx input
Try to working on some effects and keep up the bg..

I guess i will try to rate your anims
Smooth : 4.5/5
Bg : 2.5/5
Sfx / music : 4/5

Total you got 11/15

Longer durations better quality :^)
Less talk do more
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Aug 5, 2015 2:44 AM #1391661
Hey! program
Nice tryout, need more effects and some flips :^)
more fight and less talking thats what your rhg is about xD
I will give you a 3.7/5
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Aug 5, 2015 9:26 AM #1391768
Quote from Atsukedaime
Program :
Your tryout kinda AWESOMM, so smooth and nice sfx input
Try to working on some effects and keep up the bg..

I guess i will try to rate your anims
Smooth : 4.5/5
Bg : 2.5/5
Sfx / music : 4/5

Total you got 11/15

Longer durations better quality :^)
Less talk do more


Thanks man!
Also I seriously don't know what bg means...but I'm pretty sure It's something that I'm not used at.
You too THEBESTG07 :D
also I'm gonna start adding trails to my stickfigures! :D like If my foot moves pretty fast then a trail will appear same thing goes for fists and I might add ground breaks or something In my next upcoming fights :3
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Aug 5, 2015 9:27 AM #1391770
bg = background
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Aug 5, 2015 10:38 AM #1391786
Oh...thanks for telling me :D
I'll start working more on backgrounds :)
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Aug 5, 2015 10:41 AM #1391788
It would have been better if it was a gif, but it was really smooth and easing is sick, I'll just wait for a day or two, if no shows up, you've got a place out here. :D But if you get in, you really wont get to join the first collab.

11/10
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Aug 5, 2015 10:53 AM #1391790
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It would have been better if it was a gif, but it was really smooth and easing is sick, I'll just wait for a day or two, if no shows up, you've got a place out here. :D But if you get in, you really wont get to join the first collab.

11/10


I don't really have a problem If I'm in a collab or something. All I care Is being with awesome clan mates :D (hopefully)
To be honest I actually cannot export It to gif...but rather Avi because I have windows 8 and It prevents me from export long gif animations for some reason...so all I have to do I just export to Avi, put It In movie maker,edit It and then just record It with bandicam to upload It to youtube lol (There's actually an option In wich I can upload the animation to youtube from movie maker...but I can't connect to my youtube account from there lol and when I go to youtube.com I can simply disconnect and connect.


Edit:HAHA figured out you rated 11/10 :D
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Aug 5, 2015 11:18 AM #1391796
"I have windows 8 and It prevents me from export long gif animations for some reason"
Here's another reason why you should hate Windows 8. XD jk Have you tried doing it multiple times?
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Aug 5, 2015 11:31 AM #1391798
Yep...tried to move It to D,C and E but still can't let me export It... I can give you a picture of what appears to me though It's with french xD
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Aug 5, 2015 1:34 PM #1391807
there you go
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TRINITY INTRO
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