Faziri's japanese school unifrom and cheerleader outfit.....

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Dec 25, 2014 4:57 AM #1286461
well, i'm back guys..... this is a drawing better than last drawing, so how about both of this, is it nice...... think about it............

Japanese school uniform
http://regluarshow220.deviantart.com/art/Faziri-s-japanese-school-girl-outfit-502420771

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gravity school cheerleader
http://regluarshow220.deviantart.com/art/Faziri-s-gravity-school-cheerleader-outfit-501938321

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hope you like it!
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Dec 25, 2014 7:15 AM #1286528
Do you feel her breasts are large enough?
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Dec 25, 2014 7:29 AM #1286544
Some times I just don't know anymore. There's a point where I really, for the life of me, can't figure out what the fuck I am looking at here. It looks like she has no feet and that her body has been tied to two horses running opposite directions. Dude, start with the basics. ATLEAST proper construction. You can find some very helpful videos on this from Proko or Sycra on youtube.
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Dec 25, 2014 8:21 AM #1286556
I feel like you can maybe get the message from the previous post but, I'll spell this out anyway. Learn basic anatomy (at least) before delving into warped anatomy styles like anime or w/e. Feel free to explore and experiment but, make sure to get your foundation first.
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Dec 25, 2014 8:41 AM #1286561
Before I say anything else, I need to say one thing: don't ever use gradients for lighting and shading.
The breasts are the gleaming issue. They're hanging down too low as if they don't have any support. The full body stickman thing is just weird, I'd suggest you pick one or the other because they don't blend well.
Also, it's pretty obvious they're both pretty much the same drawing altered each time. And why do they not have any feet? Next you need to actually show the joints in the arms, because rectangle arms just don't work.
And lastly, one thing I've noticed is just how flat they are, but also how stiff and lifeless the poses are.
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Dec 25, 2014 10:17 AM #1286584
yes... it is!