the dagger has hair. or he's currently shaving.
never seen a mouth angled in such a way.
he appears to be made of jelly in his torso.
hair doesnt give any appearance of contour.

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the dagger has hair. or he's currently shaving.
never seen a mouth angled in such a way.
he appears to be made of jelly in his torso.
hair doesnt give any appearance of contour.

The sword was minecraft based. I tried to make it look like it was enchanted with particles flowing around. The mouth was angled because I wanted to give him a look of overconfidence. I dont know how you got how his body looks like jelly and, I dont know what contour means XD

It's pretty bad man. You should try practicing simple shapes. Keep drawing.

There isn't really anything else to say.

the arm holding the sword seems pretty distorted and the head is an odd shape. a suggestion i would make is to sketch out a drawing first if you dont do that.

Jelly= it doesnt appears that the character has a skeleton.
When doing particles try to use a color that complements the primary color of the sword