Stickman 1 man army TEST

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animattox

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Jul 24, 2008 4:55 PM #196933
This my first posting to Stickpage and its just a testing of my work so far please comment on the good parts bad parts and things i can do to improve it =D this is not finished yet either
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Jul 25, 2008 6:56 AM #197542
That was quite decent.
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Jul 25, 2008 1:59 PM #197766
:D thanks Xavier :)
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Jul 25, 2008 2:02 PM #197769
Very nice, only thing I say you need to improve on is easing and movement.
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Jul 25, 2008 2:08 PM #197772
ya it was great fighting wise, but needed to be smoother!!
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Jul 25, 2008 3:04 PM #197799
Thanks for the comments guys ill try making it smoother for the next animations :P
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Jul 26, 2008 1:02 AM #198191
ya the fighting was pretty creative. lol but ya like the others said. a lot smoother and a lot more easing.

also, be careful when you use music. when you anim replays the song from the first time around continues playing while the second one starts so you have 2 songs playing at the same time. its a little confusing. look up some tuts on buttons. you need to know how to make "replay"
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Jul 26, 2008 12:02 PM #198469
great work for your first time it was like over the rainbow have you seen that? well the good parts were: the fighting and not too much gore the bad bits: you could have made it longer a little bit faster but other than that it's great!
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Jul 26, 2008 6:56 PM #198716
i agree it should have been smother and should have added buttens i know how to do the buttems but it was just a test to see what i was like with the fighting and it no ware near complete and yeah i seen over the rainbow its a realy good animation thanks for the comments and i think if i increase my frames per second it makes it look a little smoother ill post the updated version once i done it ^_^
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Jul 26, 2008 8:29 PM #198786
Well it was ... not bad actually, make it longer and fix the music bug.
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Jul 29, 2008 4:11 PM #201135
ok pyro will do and one question whats easing?
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Jul 30, 2008 8:30 PM #202095
oh hey that video was awsome bye the way can you teach me how to make one:Spiderman:
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Aug 8, 2008 12:11 AM #212735
Good job,
This is proof that new animators actually have some creative ideas. ^^
But, obviously it could have been smoother, and have a replay button...etc etc. It kinda reminded me of "Lab Shutdown" by Fitzy.
Make the sticks a tad bit thicker, delete the neck, and keep working on something until it's actually DONE.
(Oh yea, and the music glitch was annoying >_>)
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Aug 13, 2008 12:11 PM #220095
yeah ive almost done the full version 3mins long so ill have that up smoother longer and no music bug =]