ALL MY ANIMATIIONS!

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Feb 11, 2015 10:26 AM #1307377
Spoiler (Click to Show)


i hope you guys give tips or something! :)

Newest :

Punch and run:

Punch (Click to Show)


Ragdoll practice1:

stupid fail (Click to Show)


thing (Click to Show)


Mr.Pix (Click to Show)


Sword test (Click to Show)



fail (Click to Show)


parkour (Click to Show)




stick (Click to Show)



Camera test (Click to Show)




Projects:

''The Two Brothers''
Its not finished, but i posted the beginning of the animation.

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this is from dark demon just a little bit copy and paste. HOPE YA GUYS LIKE IT
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Feb 11, 2015 10:27 AM #1307378
I don't think spoilers work without the name part. Y'know, [spoiler=NAME]
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Feb 11, 2015 10:28 AM #1307380
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I don't think spoilers work without the name part. Y'know, [spoiler=NAME]


HOH thanks for that! and pls CnC
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Feb 11, 2015 10:35 AM #1307382
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I don't think spoilers work without the name part. Y'know, [spoiler=NAME]


Its fine without the name part, he just forgot the add the equals sign


I can't properly CnC this right now, but I recommend you to go check Zed's tutorials appendix.
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Feb 11, 2015 10:37 AM #1307384
The effects aren't really good at all and don't make sense except for the fire but that effect was pretty lazy. You need to work on ironing out that shakiness and slight choppiness, and your foot placement is still horrible. And you sticks are definetly too stiff, your problem isn't really easing, more like the fact that it's so stiff. Move every joint every frame dood.
The handstand was ok maybe but :/ meeeeeh
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Feb 11, 2015 10:47 AM #1307392
C'n'C? Alright.

Focus less on effects and large detailed weapons. Focus less on silly effects and big ol' fights. Start focusing on tests. A walk loop, a run loop, a single punch, etc. Follow tutorials. Practice spacing and easing. Learn about flow.

Here's some tips about flow. Things go in a curve. Don't make stuff jump up and down as you move it. Keep those red dots in curves. But forget about knees and elbows. Focus on the hands and feet.

And when things go in a new direction, keep it curiving. When a car changes direction at a corner, it slows down a bit curves around to the new direction and speeds back up to its original speed. Imagine the dots going around invisible circles. And move things SLOWER, man. Like, twice as slow. Trust me.
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Feb 11, 2015 11:38 AM #1307400
Yeah do dat >_>
waffle so pro tho
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Feb 12, 2015 7:42 AM #1307752
Thanks for the Cnc Guys
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Feb 12, 2015 7:56 AM #1307755
I think your body is a bit...stiff. The spine should bend a bit more, especially in some of them.
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Feb 12, 2015 8:26 AM #1307763
Quote from GuardianTempest
I think your body is a bit...stiff. The spine should bend a bit more, especially in some of them.


Thanks
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Feb 12, 2015 9:01 AM #1307768
also shouldn't people try to keep all their things in one thread? or is that different here? :s
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Feb 12, 2015 10:37 AM #1307784
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also shouldn't people try to keep all their things in one thread? or is that different here? :s


Or it is just me following the rules of the darkdemon forum? O_o
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Feb 12, 2015 10:45 AM #1307786
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Or it is just me following the rules of the darkdemon forum? O_o


http://forums.stickpage.com/showthread.php?90845-Shortrtt-combo
http://forums.stickpage.com/showthread.php?90924-Sharing-other-animations
http://forums.stickpage.com/showthread.php?91106-MR-PIXXXX
http://forums.stickpage.com/showthread.php?91237-ALL-MY-ANIMATIIONS!

You're not following the rules of the darkdemon forum. :y
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Feb 12, 2015 11:41 AM #1307802
Well, Waffles has just defeated you.
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Feb 12, 2015 8:01 PM #1307891
Huh.
Defeated by a waffle.
thats pretty pathetic man.