For one thing he's not blatantly superhuman, but we have Joe to fulfill the ordinary department.
My only concern is the profile layout, it looks messy and unorganized. Most of it is just out-of-battle trivia that would better be filed under "Misc. Details".
The story highly resembles Shock series to me... with Sean saying stuff like "Clean up this mess" and Micheal working as a "janitor",also Sean fighting Micheal because he wanted promotion too *happens in the extras of Shock*.After these all events are original... I guess?
