Ya basically title says it all hope u like it.
http://www.hyunsdojo.com/dojo/3627/
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My 1st animation (Please Criticize Me)
Started by: DotGod | Replies: 5 | Views: 724
Feb 23, 2015 6:45 PM #1314639
Feb 23, 2015 6:54 PM #1314641
Your animation is great.
Just work out on the stickman by watching some of Hyun's Tutorials.
Just make the stickman with color-filled head and a bit more thick.
All for now.
- - - PEACE OUT - - -
Just work out on the stickman by watching some of Hyun's Tutorials.
Just make the stickman with color-filled head and a bit more thick.
All for now.
- - - PEACE OUT - - -
Feb 23, 2015 8:47 PM #1314730
Quote from PlyzexYour animation is great.
Just work out on the stickman by watching some of Hyun's Tutorials.
Just make the stickman with color-filled head and a bit more thick.
All for now.
- - - PEACE OUT - - -
Thanks soo much I noticed a little thicker makes it look a little more smooth.
Feb 28, 2015 2:23 PM #1317678
isnt it the second time you upload this ?
or you added more to the end of it
anyways
heres what i think :
the intro is too long - why even make intros for a test
first combo is : hook > backflip kick ( impossible to do when you have such little momentum )
when he is running to the left side:
he starts off running very fastly wich is bad
he should start very slowly, then become faster and faster
but yours starts off by flying a couple meters front and then running slowly
the part after ( the dot ) when he is playing with the ball:
the movements are too rigid
put more frames between the current ones to make more fluid movements
and at the end :
after all those movments, he just suddenly freezes.
you cant ignore physics like that m8
and use sounds
my ears feel lonely ;-;
or you added more to the end of it
anyways
heres what i think :
the intro is too long - why even make intros for a test
first combo is : hook > backflip kick ( impossible to do when you have such little momentum )
when he is running to the left side:
he starts off running very fastly wich is bad
he should start very slowly, then become faster and faster
but yours starts off by flying a couple meters front and then running slowly
the part after ( the dot ) when he is playing with the ball:
the movements are too rigid
put more frames between the current ones to make more fluid movements
and at the end :
after all those movments, he just suddenly freezes.
you cant ignore physics like that m8
and use sounds
my ears feel lonely ;-;
Mar 3, 2015 4:40 PM #1319592
I ain't pro or 'good' , but it seems you still have to put work on easing and realistic movements. I'd recommend you doing basic stuff like a single punch/kick, a jump, walking, running ..etc until you improve your easing, after that it's all to your imagination , you'd have to study every single move and make it as realistic as possible, because honestly, most of the starting points for each attack/move looked really unrealistic which. And after that you can try doing complicated stuff like mid air fights, angles, martial arts, etc.
P.S. Please don't put 20 seconds text that no one wants to read before a 10 second animation.
P.S. Please don't put 20 seconds text that no one wants to read before a 10 second animation.
Mar 4, 2015 9:03 AM #1320045
you want me to criticize you ? ok! you **** stoopid #!@* *meep* *biip* °µ° .... oh... that not how it was say ? .__. ..... sorry...
you anim is pretty great! just need to work on easing
and damn that intro was a bit long x) but i love the heart °-°
and yeah the ball in the end look a little bit weird, if you coul make a circle and edit it with the second tool this will be perfect C:
that all i wanted to say!
good luck in your next animation!
you anim is pretty great! just need to work on easing
and damn that intro was a bit long x) but i love the heart °-°
and yeah the ball in the end look a little bit weird, if you coul make a circle and edit it with the second tool this will be perfect C:
that all i wanted to say!
good luck in your next animation!