Alright so this is only my second animation since i started again, soooooooooooooooooo yea constructive criticism is welcome :D
(please dont just say it sucks, trust me, i know its not that good)

http://filz.us/2sYq

OH YEA! thanks to terkoiz for the idea!

u suk. u didn even introduce urself *jelly jelly jelly*

Looks nice! The only problem I see here is that your stick figure is keep resizing. The part when purple goes in, I think this is a good kind of a squash and stretch technique. (I think!) If you don't know what am I talking about, see this: http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/12_basic_principles_of_animation

Learn them! Learn those basic principles!

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u suk. u didn even introduce urself *jelly jelly jelly*

Looks nice! The only problem I see here is that your stick figure is keep resizing. The part when purple goes in, I think this is a good kind of a squash and stretch technique. (I think!) If you don't know what am I talking about, see this: http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/12_basic_principles_of_animation

Learn them! Learn those basic principles!

lol thanks man that site is really useful! and yea im using a mouse right now so resize is going to be my biggest obstacle right now, but i will get back to it! thanks again!

You're using a mouse? You should probably use the line tool so the lines would be smooth.

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You're using a mouse? You should probably use the line tool so the lines would be smooth.

Or the pencil tool, like me. But it's you're choice really.

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Alright so this is only my second animation since i started again, soooooooooooooooooo yea constructive criticism is welcome :D
(please dont just say it sucks, trust me, i know its not that good)

http://filz.us/2sYq

OH YEA! thanks to terkoiz for the idea!

1.) Is he fighting dummies or people? I'm asking this because THEY ARE NOT DOING ANYTHING. They're just accepting their deaths with open arms. In fact, the last guy that was sitting down the whole duration, only stood up just so the part of the wall he threw would kill him. Remember, every action and reaction must have a purpose.

2.) It's boring. No SFX, no interesting actions, and not even a single reaction. Would you stand there while your friends are being teared apart?

Personal Note: Brush, Line, or Pencil. As long as it looks good, you can go with any of the 3 or a combination. Anything you feel comfortable using. Keep it up.

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1.) Is he fighting dummies or people? I'm asking this because THEY ARE NOT DOING ANYTHING. They're just accepting their deaths with open arms. In fact, the last guy that was sitting down the whole duration, only stood up just so the part of the wall he threw would kill him. Remember, every action and reaction must have a purpose.

2.) It's boring. No SFX, no interesting actions, and not even a single reaction. Would you stand there while your friends are being teared apart?

Personal Note: Brush, Line, or Pencil. As long as it looks good, you can go with any of the 3 or a combination. Anything you feel comfortable using. Keep it up.

all the above actually im just trying to get basics down right now i know its boring, im just making sure i can make an animation semi smooth ill make a better one next

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all the above actually im just trying to get basics down right now i know its boring, im just making sure i can make an animation semi smooth ill make a better one next

As long as you learn and get better, I'll have no problem.

Good luck!

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As long as you learn and get better, I'll have no problem.

Good luck!

lol zero you are so mean D: thanks though :D ill get better but you better help me along the way ;)

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lol zero you are so mean D: thanks though :D ill get better but you better help me along the way ;)

I'll try my best.

Just hit me up a message on the VM or PM if you want to notify me.

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I'll try my best.

Just hit me up a message on the VM or PM if you want to notify me.

thanks :) will do!