Electroid

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Feb 26, 2015 12:54 AM #1316027
Electroid

abilities (Click to Show)



weakness (Click to Show)


story (Click to Show)


personality (Click to Show)


appearance (Click to Show)


demo (Click to Show)


battles finished (Click to Show)


points (Click to Show)


hitlist (Click to Show)
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Feb 26, 2015 2:54 AM #1316068
Is this character based off of the villain from the 2014 spiderman movie? Anyways, you can put me a your hitlist. I'm too busy to challenge you right now, but i will challenge you some time in the future. Here's a link to my character. Click.

My demo is not the best, but i have plans to improve it.
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Feb 26, 2015 3:02 AM #1316075
Isn't Electro based off of every electricity-based character ever?
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Feb 26, 2015 6:30 AM #1316178
Oh my! Another new wRHG! Put me in ya hitlist!!! I am also quite busy with a new wRHG right now, but I sure will challenge you in da future. And btw, why not use spoilers?
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Feb 26, 2015 6:01 PM #1316434
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Isn't Electro based off of every electricity-based character ever?


Actually the character was based off oxobs electricity and I never heard of a villain with electric superpowers in spider man. everything else im pretty sure i made up

Actually I have no idea how to put spoilers started a few days ago
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Feb 26, 2015 10:42 PM #1316571
Try finding it in the Help Forum.
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Feb 26, 2015 11:15 PM #1316587
Quote from Spyrix
Actually I have no idea how to put spoilers started a few days ago

[*spoiler=][/spoiler*]

Remove the asteriks (*) The text go in between.
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Feb 26, 2015 11:20 PM #1316593
@Spyrix: Here's how to make spoilers...

1. Type "[ s p o i l e r = ", then insert your content.
2. You should end up with something that looks like this "[ s p o i l e r = content ]. Your equals sign "=" will automatically turn into the word "for".
3. Next, add in what you want to say, such as, "this is epic", or your wRHG's information for example (see below)

[ s p o i l e r = content ]
this is epic

4. Then you close the spoiler by typing this, "[ / s p o i l e r ]"
5. This is what you'll see.

[ s p o i l e r = content ]
this is epic
[ / s p o i l e r ]

6. Remove all the spacing and then this is the result.

content (Click to Show)


There you go! Note that the info after the equals sign of the first spoiler part doesn't have to be all lowercase. It can be capitalized, punctuated, or even spaced like a sentence.

Example:

The stuff in here is EPIC (Click to Show)


You don't have to space the spoiler words out or anything either like I did in the first example. I just didn't want to turn the forum format to turn it into an actual spoiler XD.

I hope this helped out a bit!

@devi: Your explanation is simpler... :P
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Feb 26, 2015 11:56 PM #1316626
thanks
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Feb 27, 2015 2:45 AM #1316723
Can I point out that NOBODY has critiqued this?
*sigh* looks like I'll be the new one to make the new guy hate me.

"He can use his electrical energy to glide and float but not fly"
So... does he jump before just levitating or is this feather fall or what?

"Plus he goes to the gym everyday and can teleport."
So a guy based off electricity can teleport? That makes little sense. I could understand him becoming a ball of energy and moving at the speed of light. They may sound the same, but in one you still have to go through the line between point A and point B. It could become relevant in some match-ups.

"he is still a human"
Where is Waffle when you need him?
Being human is NOT a weakness.

"When he creates weapons the weapons only do 75% the damage they do in reality because the when he makes a weapon it comes from his electricity which means it's only made of energy. "
This makes no sense, none. If you can explain this too me then that's great. But, for now I'll assume lightning bolts do 100% the same amount of damage lightning bolts do.

Your story has nothing wrong with it but it seems a little rushed and... lazily done.

"Electroid is almost like me"
I don't know you. The rest of the personality section is relevant, but this isn't.

As usual I probably won't read the demo until I challenge you, I don't know why I have this habit.
The rest of your character is fine although I'm sure someone can find reasons to berate you. We promise we're doing it out of love.
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Feb 27, 2015 3:41 AM #1316749
Quote from Malacal
Can I point out that NOBODY has critiqued this?
*sigh* looks like I'll be the new one to make the new guy hate me.


I would, but i'm new and i'm still improving myself.
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Feb 27, 2015 9:36 AM #1316898
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"When he creates weapons the weapons only do 75% the damage they do in reality because the when he makes a weapon it comes from his electricity which means it's only made of energy. "
This makes no sense, none. If you can explain this too me then that's great. But, for now I'll assume lightning bolts do 100% the same amount of damage lightning bolts do.

Well, I think weapons made of electricity will be doing more than 75%-100% of damage. Since it's made of energy, the energy would be amplifying the amount of damage the original weapon can do.
It's like coating a blade (or purely made of energy) with a type of energy= Lightsaber!
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Feb 27, 2015 3:37 PM #1317089
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Where is Waffle when you need him?


I am here yes

let me look at- oh. Oh... oh? oh- oh.

Well, I'm going to say "Nice RHG" (even though I don't mean it) so anything I say from now on can be negated. Saying Nice RHG is just putting up a shield around me, stopping infractions getting through.

So, Nice RHG.

Time to speak my miiiind.

I don't care if you hate me. Hell, I don't care that I hate me. I'm too straight forward for my own good here. Deal with it~! (Click to Show)


I'm a straight-forward critque guy. I compliment good stuff when I see it and I do the opposite for bad stuff when I see it. You can see how much I like a character by how many compliments I dole out. See if you can find them all~!


Before bitching at me, please know that people asked me for this.
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Feb 27, 2015 10:05 PM #1317235
oh the the levitating is based off infamous static something not sure its used for feather fall and levitating too. hmm wait that's in the weakness? oh lol ill fix that. when I mean by "When he creates weapons the weapons only do 75% the damage they do in reality because the when he makes a weapon it comes from his electricity which means it's only made of energy. " the weapons are weaker than the ones that were actually handmade or made of metal or whatever it is made of Im not talking about the power of his energy. what do you mean the story's lazily done?! "Electroid is almost like me" would you be happy if I removed that? ikr I was wondering when someone would actually comment what you commented...

There I covered most of your problems with my (silly) Wrhg except the appearance do I have to be so specific?! Well, I'm going to say "Nice RHG" (even though I don't mean it) That just hurt...
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Feb 28, 2015 1:04 AM #1317323
Uhm, Aculations? He DOUBLE POST(ed). And by the way, WafflesMgee is just giving out his opinion, you got the right to choose what to do! You can do as he says, or ignore it and do it your way since it's your wRHG right? Hmm?