Just wanted to post my newest animation hope you like it. ohh also I noticed as people have said i need to work on easing so for the next month im going to be practicing on that so ya XD.
anyways hope u like it. it has with and without music.
http://www.hyunsdojo.com/dojo/3679/
Dot Out.
at the first part when he is walking, the sword is not in his hand in some frames
take out that 3,2,1 counting thingy
the first move should never be a super power
at the first they should probably run at each other and a sword clash ? or something alittle more intresting than flying
most of the times i just see a blue dot and a yellow dot hitting each other and moving apart again ( this is the worst thing to practice on )
it looks more like fireworks more than 2 stickmen fighting
there's not much to criticize about, other than the part in the middle where he punches and then slices with sword
the punch has no force + it made the yellow stickman fly away like it was hit by hulk
and its shaky
try to make animations of kicks and punches not two dots fighting
and get rid of super powers since you still need to improve easing and movements
