HEYYY!!!! FInally! the battle is DoNe!

Please vote fairly!

My Part : https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=V8lF3V_ZQPM&index=2&list=PLMTESkJa9MLQBN0W3gGAnokR_hutUBfNE


Eclair's part: http://www.hyunsdojo.com/dojo/3683/

i dunno but i think im going to lose.Thats because my one is boring..

I voted for eclair because I could hardly understand what was going on in yours.

Plus Flash Begginer > Pivot Begginer

Things Eclair Needs to do: Fix your legs bruh! Why do your sticks have midget legs!!!

Things Legend needs to do: Make your animation less choppy move all dots each frame when using flash and make your battle more easy to understand because I actually have no idea what the fuck was going on

Yeah honestly, both of these aren't very good but I'm going to give it to eclair cat because his was better, if only slightly
also please stop doing faces in pivot. I haven't come across a pivot face that hasn't looked god awful. Not to say Eclairs faces were any better, but I mean seriously.

looks like im goin to lose. shouldve do this on flas h :(

Your chances might have not been much better...
Eclair needs work on his fighting, but It was way less confusing and random as yours. Yours was just...confusin to watch
Eclair had a story, and slightly better fighting scenes
And that one time with the orange flare really confused me...
I'm voting Eclair definitely :P

oh well i should train more on the fighting style. i just don't really know how to start the move to do an attack x__x
It was a good Fight Shren ! your anim was smooth at least :p

Sry TheLegendA but its clearly eclair. He covered some angles and also better graphics as XxScatterxX said Flash > Pivot

I suggest u to start using Flash

Eclair's anim is much longer, that means he worked more. The legs are a bit bad, but no prob, that's not hard to fix !

Also it was more interesting 'cause of the song and the very good background and effects, also the faces were good.

Nice job Eclair !

As many have said, I think that TheLegendA's part is really random but I didn't find it boring. But I will have to go with Eclair since he has dialogue and background but I wouldn't say a great animation.

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So... can i make 1 win in my RHG topic ?

not yet.
So, i voted for eclair and here is some CnC.
LegendA:
Short, action was apenning too fast and the end is hard to understand :/ Scatter doesn't know what he's talking about. A pivot beginner is equal as a flash beginner, i would say though that you need to work a bit more on slowing the pace a bi. This is a problem i see a lot. As an exemple, look at a fight let's say.... FLLFFL vs Umbrella. There are parts where it goes a bit slower or shows some action between fighting sequances because it makes it coherent. You do not do this and in my opinion, it is the reason why it is hard to understand.
I already see people like: Well in combo aminations there is no pauses and to those people i say: check out Nhazul.
Nhazul is all about combos and yet the fact that it takes time before he hits makes it more coherent.

EclairCat:
Longer but for the only reason that your action was slower. In LegendA's part i say he needs to slow a bit, you need to go faster. The action is slow and it does not make it more coherent. Try to remove some frames.
Exemple: When you make a punch for exemple, you can do all the frames BEFORE the punch. You need to remove the frame(s) of when the punch is actually trown and you can double frame when the punch is landing.
For a Jab though (light punch) since he does not have to take a swing to charge momentum and you still want the viewer to understand, you want to double frame the last frame BEFORE the jab, remove the frame(s) of the jab being trown and do
a normal animation sequence after it is trown.
Also the effects aren't bad but try to add some blur or some glow....
Final criticism is that when someone is taking a giant lazer in his face, he flies backward. I dont care who you are hell, even superman does it.
When there is the slow motion at the end, you should make him move slowly when he is getting hit by the lazer. (Since he is cut in half, make his parts move slowly lol)

Anyways it is not bad but you still both need practice!

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EclairCat:
Longer but for the only reason that your action was slower. In LegendA's part i say he needs to slow a bit, you need to go faster. The action is slow and it does not make it more coherent. Try to remove some frames.
Exemple: When you make a punch for exemple, you can do all the frames BEFORE the punch. You need to remove the frame(s) of when the punch is actually trown and you can double frame when the punch is landing.
For a Jab though (light punch) since he does not have to take a swing to charge momentum and you still want the viewer to understand, you want to double frame the last frame BEFORE the jab, remove the frame(s) of the jab being trown and do
a normal animation sequence after it is trown.
Also the effects aren't bad but try to add some blur or some glow....
Final criticism is that when someone is taking a giant lazer in his face, he flies backward. I dont care who you are hell, even superman does it.
When there is the slow motion at the end, you should make him move slowly when he is getting hit by the lazer. (Since he is cut in half, make his parts move slowly lol)

Anyways it is not bad but you still both need practice!

oh well i cut him by the lazer °-°
i will try to make my best next time!

You mean vs me hue huehuehue >:D
I do think you need to speed up yours moves just a little, to make them realistic.
and I have to make my moves slower ._.
Practice makes perfect though c:

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oh well i cut him by the lazer °-°
i will try to make my best next time!

Still. Look at an exemple: http://www.fastswf.com/olQkd1Q

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Still. Look at an exemple: http://www.fastswf.com/olQkd1Q

I see what do you mean now :O