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My Combo anim

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Mar 6, 2015 1:55 AM #1321089
HEY! i did a combo..

http://thelegendvanims.deviantart.com/art/The-CoMBO-DEATH-518270404?ga_submit_new=10%253A1425605652


AND PLEASE GOOD CnC!
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Mar 6, 2015 2:01 AM #1321094
There is an incredible amount of resizing/wobblyness/choppyness and in general the movements just don't make any sense. Basically, any problems you could possibly have in an animation this has. I think this is mostly a result of you not being able to use what you learned from pivot in flash since the brush tool is so different. I would suggest maybe laying off on that and trying to use the line tool a bit more, that way it'll be somewhat similar to what you're comfortable with.
on another note, the sounds don't really fit either and it's either really low quality or you just didn't go into your publish setting to change the quality of the sound.
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Mar 6, 2015 2:03 AM #1321097
Good CC? Alright.

One thing I find problematic with these animations is that you don't have much concern for dimensions. Like 75% of that is unused space.

As for actual animation style, I feel like you need to learn about center of gravity and fighting stances/poses. And, as bloke above said, a lot of resizing/wobbliness.
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Mar 6, 2015 2:13 AM #1321107
C-C-C-Combo Breaker!!!
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Mar 6, 2015 4:10 AM #1321179
Quote from Drone
There is an incredible amount of resizing/wobblyness/choppyness and in general the movements just don't make any sense. Basically, any problems you could possibly have in an animation this has. I think this is mostly a result of you not being able to use what you learned from pivot in flash since the brush tool is so different. I would suggest maybe laying off on that and trying to use the line tool a bit more, that way it'll be somewhat similar to what you're comfortable with.
on another note, the sounds don't really fit either and it's either really low quality or you just didn't go into your publish setting to change the quality of the sound.


i hate the line tool. it once destryoed my life :{
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Mar 6, 2015 5:03 AM #1321216
Update. is this -- http://thelegendvanims.deviantart.com/art/Ciomb-518310435?ga_submit_new=10%253A1425618206 fine?
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Mar 6, 2015 5:37 AM #1321236
Same thing. Wobbliness. Resizing. Not smooth (learn how to ease by practicing it with a ball). It seems like you just like to rush it... just like my first battle. *facepalm+grin*

You should start from something simple. Like a ball. Learn how to do easing and this "squash and stretch" thing. And then you use a stick figure doing a kick or a punch, not a combo. Or make it running or walking. Just start from something simple. And something that you must remember during the animation process, be patient.

And please use the line tool. I know it's possible to use the brush tool with a mouse. But if you just want to make animation and not wanting to master something else first (like mastering how to draw with a mouse first before animating), just use the line tool.
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Mar 6, 2015 6:26 PM #1321563
Quote from TheLegendA
i hate the line tool. it once destryoed my life :{


If you are using a mouse, you'll just have to use the line tool. On the other hand, if you are using a tablet, I'd instantly assume you have no concept of art and/or have never drawn with a pencil/pen before.
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Mar 6, 2015 8:12 PM #1321617
this is just bad ;-; why does his arm become 2 times longer when he punches
please just practice with pivot
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Mar 7, 2015 12:13 AM #1321753
Quote from Exxonite
If you are using a mouse, you'll just have to use the line tool. On the other hand, if you are using a tablet, I'd instantly assume you have no concept of art and/or have never drawn with a pencil/pen before.


how do i use line tool! how do i make it THICKER?
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Mar 7, 2015 1:58 AM #1321819
shit (Click to Show)


If the properties tab actually didn't show up, try pressing ctrl+F3.
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Mar 7, 2015 5:28 AM #1321929
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shit (Click to Show)


If the properties tab actually didn't show up, try pressing ctrl+F3.


THANKS! now i can make angels easier!
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Mar 11, 2015 12:21 AM #1324023
you should definitely not be doing angles, you don't know enough about basic movement
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Mar 13, 2015 6:07 AM #1324961
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you should definitely not be doing angles, you don't know enough about basic movement


IM NOT doing angles yet. lol.
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