A new animation I made, I think it's pretty good. It was really hard to do the running since I was moving the floor in all directions, and the fall I liked. I tried adding a blur to the fall, but it looked horrible, so i took it out. The end is very similar to my McDonalds animation, but with a twitch. realize I cant twith for crap. -___- So I hope you like it, C+C and all that stuff.
http://animatorhost.com/public/1217103308.gif

ok CnC part:

The run did look horrible and it was quite choppy in most areas. Most people hate the dumb little twitch....it just makes everything look suckish. Your key areas you need to improve on are your movements and smoothness.

Okay. Anything else?

work on foot placemnets :3

the run suckd(no offence:Smile:) and u need to work on foot placement. instead of twitching like that, just twitch once and leave it be.

chopppehhh ease more

your going on the right track, keep practrcing, just understand how to move the legs and the knees and when to bend and when to leave it straight. oh and really work on the body reaction on each foot stomp. The fal wasn't as stiff but make him slowly dangle, like show air friction by moving the arms and a bit of the head.

that's all you ned to improve on that.